Cottontale: The Bunny Kingdom Short: Saige’s Birthday!
read from right to left!
Made for my Japanese class to practice my writing/language comprehension. Thanks to Aya and Ruki (lovely co-writers!!) for proofreading! [there still may be some mistakes]
Translations under the cut. :)
Page 1
AIDA: Anya!!
ANYA: What is it, Aida?
[Introduction box: 1st Bunny Princess Anya]
AIDA: Soon, it’ll be Saige’s birthday!
[Introduction box: 2nd Bunny Princess Aida]
ANYA: Ah!! I’m in trouble! I didn’t buy anything! (sfx: kya--)
AIDA: It’s alright. Go shopping with me, and we can buy a present together.
ANYA: Aaah... you’ve saved me... hey, what does Saige want? (sfx: flop)
Page 2
AIDA: Eh--
ANYA: ...you don’t know?
AIDA: Ehehe... how about a new hat?
ANYA: That’s no good... Saige’s parents gave Saige the hat that she wears.
AIDA: I see...
AIDA: Then, how about making a big cake?
ANYA: That sounds great! Let’s do it!
Page 3
AIDA&ANYA: Let’s make a cake!
~1 HOUR LATER~
(sfx: gloooooom)
AIDA: ........it looks delicious?
ANYA: It does NOT look delicious.
AIDA: What should we do?
??????: You should give up on making a cake.
Page 4
AIDA&ANYA: Fenris!!
FENRIS: Yo!
[Introduction box: Bunny Prince Fenris]
FENRIS: You’re giving that to Saige?
ANYA: No. It’s garbage. (sfx: slide/dump)
AIDA: Then, what do we give?
FENRIS: I have an idea.
ANYA: What is it?
(sfx: whisper, whisper)
ANYA: That’s it!
Page 5
SAIGE: (sfx: door opens) Geez, I’ve been working all day long so I’m tired... I’m hom--
(sfx: Pop! Pop!)
AIDA,FENRIS&ANYA: Happy Birthday, Saige!
SAIGE: Eh--? What’s this-- (sfx: confusion)
ANYA: Here! Take this!
SAIGE: Th-thank you. You all remembered my birthday?
PAGE 6
AIDA: Of course! It’s because you are our precious friend!
SAIGE: !!!
FENRIS: Alright, open up your present.
SAIGE: Yes... Waah! Thank you very much... it’s pretty... (sfx: sparkle)
SAIGE: But... my birthday is tomorrow.
AIDA: Huh!?
ANYA: You’re lying!
FENRIS: Really?