#cappuccica

[perfumeandpancakes]

the only thing motivating me to get a job rn is that i'm going to save up money and go bug fa1loutboy and cappuccica

[perfumeandpancakes]

cappuccica replied to your quote:i want cat

i want every cat

SO SHALL IT BE

[perfumeandpancakes]

i want cat

tumblr user katja cappuccica one month ago when i posted a selfie with my cat

[alicerackham]

hi! i just discovered your blog and you seem like you really know your stuff! I want to be a writer too, but as a senior in high school I find myself procrastinating a lot and I'm starting to doubt my abilities. do you have any possible advice? I've posted a few things on my writing blog "wordswerq" if you wouldn't mind critiquing. I'm sure you're really busy so I'm sorry to take up your time haha. thank you so much!!

Oh my gosh, not at all! I’m happy to offer my thoughts — but remember, as with all art, opinions are eeeeverywhere. Who knows if I’m “right”.

I took a look at Tulips. I’ll preface by saying that poetry in particular is hard to “judge” because there are just no rules. In prose, you’re looking for a captivating story, characters you relate to, and effective interaction. In poetry, it’s your feelings on paper and I can’t tell you what is right or what is wrong about your feels.

I may be wrong, but this poem seems to be about “the first time” — the first sexual experience. I think stylistically, I wish it would hesitate a little more because isn’t that what the first time is like? Hesitant, cautious, uncertain? So actually using the poem’s rhythm and structure to mimic that might be a cool choice. It also looks like an AABBCCDDetc. scheme, which is pretty simplistic. Is the first time simple? What if you broke your scheme? Isn’t that what the first time is — breaking who you were to become someone different (arguably. you’re still you.)?

“i tangle in the flimsy sheet” is a beautiful line and can mean so much.

I don’t know why I picked Tulips, just stood out! I’d love to see short stories on that blog too, to chat prose. 

As far as advice goes: never procrastinate. Art, any art industry, doesn’t have room for that. YOU HAVE TO BE IN LOVE WITH IT. You have to live, breathe, and love this stuff — I’m not saying don’t “be a person”, but if you only kinda like writing (and that’s FINE and valid), don’t pick it as a career. You’ll break your own heart because it is just so competitive. Pick up a pen. Write one line — one crappy line, maybe, but one line — every day. Read everything you can to get better. 

Don’t doubt yourself, but don’t keep your mind narrow either; the world is huge, get out there! :)

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