#chap44

[askgiegueandcrew]

[askgiegueandcrew]

How many apples have you collected so far?

[endofthewheel]

this gets absolutely worse by the page.

I hurt my hand to hurt yours.  LAME.  Good lord every other story is better than the one that matters most.  Pathetic.

[endofthewheel]

Been reading this whole time.  Too much happening to make comments, I guess.  Not worth comments... I'd keep making the same ones.

But I'm getting a bit bored already and I really don't care about Padan Fain Mist being "Chaos" to the Good/Bad of the Shadow and Light. 

I also found it distinctly distasteful that Thom used the word "exquisite" to describe the Last Battle - as if Jordan was saying his own work was exquisite.

It's adequate, as stories go.  Just adequate.   I've read much, much better.