can i complain about bad smut again? like today i found a smut thats labeled cnc and it was what it said it was... but it was just so... badly written. like, im fine with suspending my disbelief but theyre writing a cnc anal scene where they immediately skip over the detail about the character pushing his dick into someone's unlubed hole and how that might felt. just immediately said, he slammed it in and the other guy wailed, and then they move on. no talk about how penetrating someone in that state might have felt, no talk about how the pain makes the character feels helpless or anything. no talk about anything tearing down there. didnt even write a lengthy forced undressing scene so i dont know what they find hot in cnc to be writing it anyway. i feel like im reading an ikea assembly manual.













