I love how a single comment can stop all thoughts of writing and kill the urge to write. Don't get me wrong I have welcome these sorts of comments in the past, as way of clarifying my writing, because not everything in my head makes it into the story. But this bland, vague comment has me doubting so much. Then everything swings to anger because how dare they make such a comment without anything behind it. I want to defend myself and tell them off for it, but then I remember to just not get involved. I know everyone won't like what I am writing. But I would hope they would give me more than some generic comment thinking that is okay, versus actual constructive criticism, for things I can fix. I had admitted at the beginning and end of the it that I wasn't terribly pleased with the work, and I was hoping to fix it later. But Rather than giving me advice on how to fix it, they simply say it shouldn't be there in the story arc. I'm sorry, you have no idea where the arc is going. it is a WIP, not a completed work. Let things build. You may not see the purpose of it being there at this time, but I, THE AUTHOR, know it is necessary for the next parts. And I even asked for advice at the end of the last part for this specific part. Seriously done for the night.
Walking away from the computer because I am too damn mad to deal with this shit right now.









