okay ignoring the intro and outro because this is, in it's full form, actually a video for my boyfriend's birthday-- how does the singing sound? like i'm aware i'm not great i just want to know if i should redo it for my boyfriend because he's an amazing singer and a bit of a music snob.
i hear little things off with it but i cannot tell if it's just me being scared it's not good enough, or legitimate errors that he will care about
anyone musical want to help me?

















