#darknessintheinside

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Reading 𝑰𝒏𝒅𝒆𝒍𝒊𝒃𝒍𝒆 over and I think I have a new batch of questions. Lmao.

Fire at will 😌💕

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When do we get the last part?!

Very soon 😄💕 You're very sweet and patient so you'll be one of the first people to know when it goes up 💗

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𝑰𝒏𝒅𝒆𝒍𝒊𝒃𝒍𝒆 is some good writing! And some good reading! I have questions! So in Chapter I when it says EJ doesn’t take to Ramonda well.. is that a genetic thing due to having Erik’s genes and them being supernatural being that Erik isn’t fond of her as well? Lol.

Also is there significance with EJ turning 6 being that he’s supernatural? Does something happen?!👀

With Bunny, she didn’t have anatomy growing up due to her church upbringing but seems that she didn’t have it being with Erik either? So he was her first love and she was sheltered so it seems that he took advantage of that and molded her into what he wanted her to be as his s/o.

So she couldn’t get an abortion due to the control and power he had?!

”Even when that pedestal was surrounded by a gilded cage and topped with a pristine glass casing.”

Did he have her locked up during her pregnancy?!👀

How long were they together?

I have so many questions. 😭

I’m so curious to know more about their backstory!

okay, I’m done now.. lol. on to Part 3 now!

Such a great story!

Me coming home late to such a nice comment/ask 💗✨

So first of all, I want to thank you for reading and and putting this in my inbox. These are my favorite kinds of comments 🫶🏾

And now for the questions 👀

● So, EJ not taking well to Ramonda is a genetics thing. But mostly because he could sense that she isn't human. He could tell she was like Erik, but not like Erik, so he found her sus as fuck 😂But she'd never done anything other than be an Annoying Adult™, so he just brushed it off. ● There's not a huge significance with EJ turning six other than Erik remembering that was around the time he started showing signs of being different. He's about to go into first grade and really realize that he's stronger than the other kids, and can see, smell, and hear better than them. There was no way Bunny would've known what to do about that, and Erik knows it😂 ● 👀 Bunny was definitely sheltered and there were/are definitely scenarios in which Erik used that to his advantage. But trying to turn her into something she's not was not his goal. He was what most parents would consider a "bad influence", and always tries to get her to explore things she is afraid to attempt. This story taking place from Bunny's POV after all the things she's been through shapes how she views Erik when he first arrives. The epilogue will show more how they usually interact with one another in a less volatile situation. ● "So she couldn’t get an abortion due to the control and power he had?!" All in due time 😈The epilogue will reveal the fuckery. ● "Did he have her locked up during her pregnancy?!" You know what? Thank you for asking this because I'm adding to the things to mention in the epilogue when everything is explained. ● She and Erik were together for about seven years. She leaves when EJ is around four and Indelible takes place roughly two years later.

😄I'm glad you're so interested in their backstory, because I've been playing around with a prequel. I'll see if anybody wants it after the epilogue is out, but I might have to turn Bunny into a full-on OC to do that kinda mini-series.

And again, thank you for reading and commenting/asking 💕✨

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She went to an HBCU halfway across the map, “A WHOLE NEW WORLD!” Baybee I know she had a time getting out her shell . And I know Erik had a time helping her. Frustratingly and all.😂

Erik audibly scoffs. “I wasn’t asking you why, B—I’m telling you.” 

“Telling me what? That you plan to make my child unhappy to further your agenda?” You snap back. “I won’t let you–”

“Don’t tell me what the fuck you gon’ let me do.” 

There he go being mean again. Smh. 🤦🏾‍♀️ 

How do they get their proper names?

 “How was his birthday? Erik told me he had himself a party wasn’t nobody else invited to.”

Parents are so funny. Lmaoooo 

It says a lot that her mom has an established relationship with Erik. I’d love to see how that happened. 

Do we get to find out how Bunny is a carrier? 

10/10 story. You did that! 👏🏾

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❥ She went to an HBCU halfway across the map, “A WHOLE NEW WORLD!” Baybee I know she had a time getting out her shell . And I know Erik had a time helping her. Frustratingly and all.😂

LMAOO The fact I started singing the song when I read whole new world 😂👏🏾Cause you are NOT wrong! 👀I'm about to post the prequel snippet. Finally had time to sit and edit a little bit for other people's eyes to read and comprehend. I'll make sure to DM it to you first since I have to make a tumblr post for here.

❥ Erik audibly scoffs. “I wasn’t asking you why, B—I’m telling you.”

“Telling me what? That you plan to make my child unhappy to further your agenda?” You snap back. “I won’t let you–”

“Don’t tell me what the fuck you gon’ let me do.”  There he go being mean again. Smh. 🤦🏾‍♀️ 

YUP 😭 He was not trying to hear her mouth right then, but he felt bad for snapping at her and made it up to her after...🥴

❥ How do they get their proper names?

I've always imagined Wakandans get their names in some kind of traditional way. 🤔I got ideas for it, but in EJ and Erik's case, it was a little less traditional seeing as Erik was an outcast from that side of his family.

❥  “How was his birthday? Erik told me he had himself a party wasn’t nobody else invited to.” Parents are so funny. Lmaoooo It says a lot that her mom has an established relationship with Erik. I’d love to see how that happened. 

😂Oh it's a trip how he gets into their good graces considering how wild you hear him talk to Bunny about them. The man is mastermind of manipulation tactics, both normal and supernatural.

❥ Do we get to find out how Bunny is a carrier? 

Ooooh yes!! I got a whole thing planned out for how it works. My AuDHD ass went and did research on blood-typing and genetics all the way back in October to plan that part out. It's what got parts like this put in there from chapter 3 😈

Thank you so much for sending in your thoughts. It's the main part I love about fandom and writing 🥹💕

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Do we get to know what happened between bunny and her roommate in the prequel?

Why does T’Chaka still have it out for EJ and Bunny?! 

Is Jessica a hunter or no?

Erik says this “ She ain’t a hunter, but she’s been around sticking her nose where it don’t belong, looking for that brother of hers….” 

Then goes on to say “What did I just tell you about staying away from hunters, huh?!”

Where are they located?

Are they married now?

Why does Erik like to be so domineering when it comes to Bunny?

I know that could be a personality trait that he’s kept being that he was Killmonger. Telling her to shut up and see down is insane. 💀

You back with more for me? 😈

Do we get to know what happened between bunny and her roommate in the prequel?

You sure do! 👀 Her name is Cecelia and as soon as I get the chapter one snippet up, I'll make sure to tag/DM it to you.

Why does T’Chaka still have it out for EJ and Bunny?! 

He doesn't. Not really anyway 🤣 He's just a bitter old man who doesn't like losing. Erik outsmarted him, so he's salty and passing everything off as a "well, that's your problem" kinda situation.

Is Jessica a hunter or no? Erik says this “She ain’t a hunter, but she’s been around sticking her nose where it don’t belong, looking for that brother of hers….” Then goes on to say “What did I just tell you about staying away from hunters, huh?!”

Nah, Jessica's not a hunter, but the fact her entire family is/were/are hunters is what Erik was getting at. He was mostly pissed off because Bunny wasn't thinking about what could've happened if Jessica was a hunter, or if she was there to lure her in to some kinda trap. Since Tyler broke the rules by trying to protect Bunny and EJ, his family basically wrote him off as dead. But his sister wasn't willing to give up on him and used what she does know about hunting to track Bunny down and get some answers. And she almost got her dumb ass killed 😭

Where are they located? Are they married now?

Erik took her to California since that's where he was born and raised, and it's where his proverbial territory is at. There's a 'neutral ground' of sorts in every state, but he wanted her and EJ far away from T'Chaka in case that oldhead got any funny ideas.

Why does Erik like to be so domineering when it comes to Bunny? I know that could be a personality trait that he’s kept being that he was Killmonger. Telling her to shut up and see down is insane. 💀

CACKLING 🤣👏🏾 it's definitely a personality trait of his. When he gets into one of his overprotective/obsessive moods, he can get pretty mean because his first first reaction is anger and defensiveness. This part of him✨

Thank you for dropping all your thoughts and questions in my inboxuuuh! And thank you for reading my stuff. feel free to yap as much as you want in my inbox/DM💕

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Hey girl hey!

okay, so Ima break this up into parts.

I love the evolution of how Erik expresses himself with Bunny and EJ. He’s very vulnerable and affectionate considering what he went through. It also makes sense why he felt the way he did when she left. That’s an open wound which shows the insecurity of him losing his loved ones. I don’t think Bunny realized how sensitive he was to that being that she was thinking of what she felt was best for her and EJ. They had built something then she snatches away from him. 

“I wasn’t about to let no other man have what’s mine.” Bunny put the hoodoo on this man. 😂 Orrrrrr that could be those characteristics of possessiveness and obsessiveness which he has. 

It’s also not lost on me how he taught her more about the world than her Bible thumping parents. He relishes in the fact that she learned from him. He’s taught EJ a lot too. 

Their attraction to each other is insane! Was it also that way for them or is it amplified now due to them being back together and her being turned?

Hiiii! So happy to see you back in my inboxuuuuhh!

You are right on the money about Bunny's leaving Erik being an open wound 👏🏾😂That man had NO hinges when he first showed up and he cooled and settled down from this:

To this ✨

Lmao I make callbacks to a lot of things and link them together subtly, even if no one notices at first. His goal at the beginning had been to show her how much that hurt. By the end of it, he was aiming for having a bit more patience until she came to terms with their new/rekindled relationship.

I plan on possibly having a snippet of the prequel upa bit later today so you can see a bit for yourself 👀

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What a series. It was amazing ! Such a great read! I actually don’t have any questions. But I also have to read it two more times to make sure.😂

🤣👏🏾 That alone made me cackle. Take your time and thank you for reading. I'll be doing the prequel series like I intended as well.

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Life been lifing but..

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