this isn't a query, rather its abt defy on a03 (ryo's harem lmao). i rly rly rly cant wait for your new chapters… its been an incredibly long time since i've genuinely fallen in love with a fanfic and binge read it in one go… usually i back out in 2 minutes if its boring or too inconsistent with their canonical personalities….. but this felt so canon, like this would happen if someone like ryo rly ended up in windbreaker.... and ryo's personality is the absolute best. its giving 'that time i reincarnated into an otome game with characters from my favourite anime and earned myself a reverse harem' vibe😂😭. and she is so strong im in love with this oc. i'm so freakin excited for ur hiatus to end, but get tons of rest and work done and be healthy ok? tons of loveee❤️❤️❤️ oh i remembered... i didnt expect suo to undress in front of everyone tbh, cuz there are so many theories of him having tattoos or scars or brands... so tht sleepover and his willingness to go to the onsen with the protag startled me. other than tht its all good
Hi, and tysm for this long and thoughtful message!
Okay firstly, I just want to say that you make an excellent point with regards to the scenes with Suo during the sleepover and onsen incident! I wrote most of this fic when I first started reading wbk, and I think only the chapters just up to the Noroshi Arc had been posted. I initially intended for the sleepover to be at the school or at Ryo's and first later added Kiryu's house as the location after I read the chapter about them visiting him. Ngl, at that point I had kind of forgotten what I wrote about Suo, and now that you point it out, I want to re-write those parts of the fic. I'll probably do that at some point, when I get the time.
I also just want to say thank you for this message! I'm super happy to hear that you enjoyed the fic and that you like Ryo. She's so dear to me, so I get so happy when you guys like her too! And ty for your kind words – I really really wanted to update this fic more this spring, but med school is always more demanding than I anticipate (why do I keep being surprised? LMAO) and now, my exams are coming up again soon.
HOPEFULLY, during my summer vacation, I'll have lots of time to write! I can't wait to get back to updating this fic. Tysm to everyone who still reads and follows the fic, for being so patient and understanding<3















