Hello, could we please trouble you for an OPINION? We're a brand new OC academy roleplay about a haunted boarding school in Nice, France. Overall, it's just your average academy roleplay with the occasional paranormal twist to keep things interesting. Thank you so much in advance and I hope you have a lovely day.
❞ HELLO LOVELY ! Mind you that this is just my opinion, and you know these can differ. The last thing I want to do is criticize or be rude. I hope this may help you out, sweetheart ! Find the opinion on DELMASHQ bellow the cut ! Xoxo ❞
* ✰. — icon & url ❞
okay so i really like your icon, i mean it’s a normal picture but it’s pretty aesthetically pleasing and i like it. same goes for your url. great job on both, petal. i’d surely check it out if i came across it !!
* ✰. — main ❞
okay, so, landing on your page, i like it. it’s simple, but the colour scheme you picked is nice to look at and i just really dig it a lot. it once again proves that you don’t need some super fancy theme to have a cool and neat looking main. i like the graphics i see and i enjoy scrolling down your main, you know ?? it has some amazing features and nice, interesting extra information...a lot to discover and i love that !!
* ✰. — pages ❞
i’m going to run over the most important pages here, cupcakes !!
navigation: this is a basic, super easy to navigate on navigation page, and i feel like these are just the best option, you know ?? very clear, very useful... it’s perfect for me !!
plot: great plot , petals. i feel like it’s amazingly written and it surely has an interesting twist that you don’t come across very often. nice idea to base it loosely on asian horror movies, i honestly haven’t seen that before. i’m sure the lovers will dig this roleplay a lot !!
rules: very much complete and honestly nothing for me to remark. if feel like all the needed information is there !!
application & app count: your app’s great, if you ask me. complete yet not overwhelming, so that’s great. for your appcount, i’d maybe add in the character name so people don’t send in an app for a role with the same name, but that’s all there for me to remark, sweethearts !!
characters: n/a, because oc roleplay !!
i think those are the main pages. skimming through the additional pages, i feel like you have all the needed information listed so good job, dears !!
* ✰. — over all impression & advises ❞
there’s not a lot for me to remark ?? i like your main, your graphs, you have an original plot and your needed pages are there and well thought through. amazing job, sweethearts, keep it up !!
* ✰. — recommendation ? ❞
if you’re into horror roleplays, then defintely !!
Hello, could we please trouble you for a FIRST LOOK REVIEW? We're a brand new OC academy roleplay about a haunted boarding school in Nice, France. Overall, it's just your average academy roleplay with the occasional paranormal twist to keep things interesting. Thank you so much in advance and I hope you have a lovely day.
Sure thing love! Please remember this is just my opinion, it is not made too hurt anyone in anyway. If you have any questions or would like a full review feel free too message me!
Your first look is under the cut
First off your URL is fitting since it’s the school name and HQ so props for that. When I open the page, your theme is a little simple and if it wasn’t for the text I wouldn’t be able to tell what this roleplay is about. That is until I scroll down, the plot summary is easy too read and gets too the point. The navigation is rather easy to get around, however with the side Navi you should have put different link, like an MTA, members page ect, not the same ones as the top navi. I really like the “Staff” section I find it very fun. I also really like your disclaimer. I do think the main needs more colours but it’s nice. You have what seems too be three admins on the side, but i’m only seeing one on the main? The main seems mostly active so good job on that. Considering this is a first look that’s about all I can say!
Hello, could we please trouble you for an OPINION? We're a brand new OC academy roleplay about a haunted boarding school in Nice, France. Overall, it's just your average academy roleplay with the occasional paranormal twist to keep things interesting. Thank you so much in advance and I hope you have a lovely day.
opinion !!
i normally don’t live big themes, i’m a container lover. but this theme is actually really nice and i love the lightness of the graphics and that they match the theme. there are so many people that are like “white is neutral, it matches everything!” but no. light colors match white the best when it comes to themes and you’re doing that correctly. what i’m not thrilled about is that you’re using a graphic for your admin responses. you’ll get more interest if you use gif icons of someone. the graphic is fine for nightly sign offs or like announcements, but for promoing and answering questions it’s best to use gif icons. although it’s not an rp i would personally join, your plot is very interesting and definitely drawing. i don’t really have anything else to say, so good luck on your journey !!
Hello, could we please trouble you for a SHOUTOUT? We're a brand new OC academy roleplay about a haunted boarding school in Nice, France. Overall, it's just your average academy roleplay with the occasional paranormal twist to keep things interesting. Thank you so much in advance and I hope you have a lovely day.
Of course loves. If you dig academy RP’s check this one out!
