Mar 14, 2025
first three chapters tomorrow
Big changes I think I’ve made
Made the characters dialogue like real people
Every chapter is slightly longer
Everything is a lot less bland
Seriously what was I thinking in Edgar’s intro chapter it was so bland so I made it better
Redefined a lot of the pointless obscenity into mature theming with meaning
Added obscenity with a point too
Leaning further into inspiration
here’s a sample
#dd show#dimensional disaster#dimensional disaster development process#it’s insane how much better of an author I became after I analyzed my favorite books for hours on end word for word#“talent” isn’t real it’s just about being delusional enough to produce shit and recognize it’s shit and then do it again and again anyways#until it’s not shit anymore