"I should be the one scowling," Satotz points out calmly, looking at Hisoka's reflection in the mirror, "seeing as I am the one suffering damage." He pokes at the scratch marks on his cheek gingerly, and then at his split lip.
(Fic in question is Working in Tandem, my April Fools’ fic.)
That Line was written when I still thought the fic would be crack, hence the mention of Satotz’s lips. Except we all know where the fic went, and it was not where I intended it to go at all i.e, how is this the most romantic fic I have ever written nobody knows.
But uh, yeah. I actually found Satotz’s speech patterns a little difficult to write, and they took me some getting used to + a lot of editing in order to eliminate as many contractions as possible without making him sound too stilted.
