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♮, and also ♭. From what I've seen, you appear to understand Hinata, but your dialogue is sometimes odd. Like, I can't picture Hinata saying it. Dialogue is something I struggle with all my characters, but it is one of the cleanest areas to grow better at. This isn't really a bad thing, though, because everyone pictures differences with their characters, and in that case, you run a very well written and in depth Hinata and I admire you greatly. I hope my criticism was constructive.

Thank you!

And yeah, I agree. My dialogue's kinda odd. Thanks for letting me know.

[lyceenordinaire-archive-blog]

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Mahiru is happy to finally see her dream pairing come true but Kuzuryuu and Pekoyama furiously deny these heterosexual advances Meanwhile, other Peko weeps for the loss

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