#dusk's dawn

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Dusk's Descent - Dusk's Dawn

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Voting ended onMar 28, 2023

Dusk's Descent

Swing! Tavi Swing!

[raine-art-blog]

Hey everyone! Remember that shitty MLP fan animation “Dusk’s Dawn” with the weird Mane 6 knockoff OC’s and the confusing ass story? I re-imagined it. Well, at least the characters, I haven’t thought of how I’d rewrite the plot. 

Some other notes about the characters:

- Breeze Rider’s personality is mostly the same as the original, but without the shitty catchprases and forced humor. And yes, he’s a stallion but I kept the mare head shape on him because I like that it made him stand out. 

- Geranium Bulb (redesigned from Doodlecute seriously fuck kinda name is that) is a gardener who has a love-hate relationship with Breeze Rider since he’s constantly leaving snow on her plants 

- Bridge Bearing/Mr. Bear (redesigned from Mr. Brave), if the hard hat is any indication, is a construction worker. I have a feeling Mr. Brave from the original was supposed to be one too since he does mention working on a bridge but not like the original really set up its characters very well lol 

- Iridescence is a vet rather than a nurse. I mean if she’s gonna be a Fluttershy knockoff let’s at least keep reason for helping animals consistent. And I made her mane and tail actually iridescent.  

- Star Gaze (redesigned from Star Whistle) is a simple stargazer/astrologist rather than a straight-up Twilight knockoff

- Donut Glaze/Battering Ram’s(redesigned from Donut form the original animation, obviously) information is already up there. The part of changing his name was inspired by Tempest Shadow/Fizzlepop Berrytwist. Also I colored him like an actual jelly-filled donut. 

- Dusk and Dawn’s (redesigned from Dusk and his evil mirror clone) information is also already described above. The part with their mom is based off the scene where Dusk’s mother is briefly seen in the original even though we have no idea what her deal is aside from some very vague comment about illusions, idk man 

[miss-barker]

Someone who has never seen the infamous MLP fan animation Dusk’s Dawn try to explain what’s going on here.

[high-heathen]

MLP Oblivion dialogue

I made a thing. Using old memes.

[mardigrasqueen]

MLP Fans! Lend me your ears! I will be rewriting the entire plot of Dusk's Dawn! (God help me if I survive rewatching it) If anyone has any advice or better names for the ponies that would be a great help for me.

[the-powerful-burst]

Dusk's Dawn Review In Less Than 4 Sentences.

EVERYTHING in Dusk's Dawn is on the level of The Room.

I'm not joking.

[mintyroot]

I got some MLP blind bags yesterday, and I think I found Breeze Rider.

[monarch-boo]

Is it bad that I actually like Dusk's Dawn?

I mean, I guess it was a liiiitle crummy, but they put a lot of effort into it and it's a pretty neat concept. I think it's neat that someone took all that time to make a fan episode with OCs. It's a lot better than I could do.

Is there a part 2 yet? I remember seeing a To Be Continued thing at the end of the first part, but I haven't heard much about it in a while.

I hope the person/people who made it didn't get discouraged because people bashed it.