elusiveillusionist submitted to wandmore:
Thanks very much for your analyses of the Only Child, again! Seeing your thoughts is always great fun. Here’s another character I was toying with:
Illegitimate daughter of a wealthy Muggleborn businessman, has one legitimate sister a year younger. Despite her illegitimacy, she’s naturally talented at pretty much everything she sets her mind to, which, juxtaposed against a less academically able younger sister, means that any initial poor treatment of her by her decidedly amoral father is quickly set aside and, to her sister and stepmother’s resentment, she becomes if anything the favoured child. She doesn’t really suffer from Cinderella syndrome, though-if anything, she’s the domineering one due to the father being very much the dominant force in the family, something that renders her stepmother and sister unable to really do much but resent.
She’s somewhat arrogant due to this upbringing, very confident in her talents, appearance, but she’s also too smart to fail to realize that ultimately it was her father’s whims that determined her position of privilege, which keeps her somewhat grounded. This might extend to the point of being an insecurity for her, a constant awareness dogging her childhood that she’s walking a tightrope of approval that could go very, very badly for her if she at some point falters and no longer is able to play the role that’s brought her so much success so far. This probably manifests as something of a stubborn streak.
As mentioned earlier, she’s pretty naturally talented in general-she learns quickly, has a good memory, and will definitely prove to be very, very magically able when she arrives at Hogwarts. Whilst she’s the sort who’s likely to score highly in all her classes, I’d imagine an especial proclivity for Defense and Transfiguration. She’s also charismatic, but not extremely good at making friends - she holds herself too aloofly for that, and as such she’s more the sort who inspires admiration than affection. Her main flaws stem from her pride and stubbornness - she also has something of a hero complex in that she’s very bad at leaving things alone if she perceives them to be unjust, and sometimes might stir hornet’s nests that would be better left untouched.
She’d probably be most at home in Gryffindor despite probably being able to fit into any of the houses decently well, and would likely be someone who constantly finds themselves in the center of great events as an active player as she grew older. Her lack of ability to really slow down and actively consider the rightness of her own actions does mean that she’s as likely to be a well-intentioned antagonist as she is a hero, though.
Wood: Aspen, Larch or Pine. Core: Phoenix Feather if Larch, Dragon Heartstring if Aspen or Pine. Length: 12″-13″, with 13 3/4″ for the absolute upper limit. I’d say around 13″. Flexibility: Stubborn Maker: Garrick Ollivander Details: I’m not terribly sure about the details here, because you’ve described this character’s situation rather than they themselves.











