Ok-- so. Scourge sure as hell looks dead as shit and FIRESTAR being the one to do in while in the throws of PTSD???!!?! Scourge, you didn't just pick a tiny sad boy to try and kill, you picked a traumatized tiny sad boy to try and kill. And failed. Because despite everything Firestar is STILL a clan cat who while not good at fighting, still had everything drilled into his head by his mentors and father
(oh my God, was that move he used the advice from Tigerclaw???? Crying. Absolutely crying.)
The biggest question is: HOW ARE THERE STILL 19 CHAPTERS?!?! Is this gonna be 19 chaps of guilt? Because I'm all for that but low-key doubt it.
God, amazing job on this, I love it so much. Firestar hoped only one cat died. Firestar hoped he wouldn't have to kill anyone. Only one wish got granted.
I am so curious how you all will take the rest of this book.
What I will say now is that this death was meant to happen later into the story, but we had so much more shit to write about that it ended up at the halfway point of a much longer book. We got a lot to cover, and I hope you'll like it!