Trying to capture a moment from “Not a Break-up”.
I think the truth — or what cuts closer to the bone — is in the front-facing stillness.
This moment is actually about rage turning into a performance of composure, which I didn‘t fully pull off here. It would work better as comic panels, showing that shift through movement.
I tried different angles and my usual style, but none fit.
The author described it best (excerpt):
“In those chapters, Tony was pretending to be a robot with no feelings, whose only purpose was to go along with Steve and do what was ‘right’ in his eyes.”
Art-wise, a blank face is a hard sell for “trying desperately to hold down the hurt of being let go, when that hurt hasn’t faded one bit.”
So, go read the original.
Room number: 27100441
(Text on artwork is in Chinese, my first language. Hope the meaning carries through the visual!)













