Hi beautiful, so here are my suggestions.
Suggestion #1: With her at Bucky’s door he lets her in and listens. She could vent about feeling tested all the time, and he doesn’t judge or analyze her, gives her a calm space to breathe. It also subtly highlights how different that feels compared to Peter right now.
Suggestion #2: You might consider having Wanda do her training the next day, but this time, make it a bit messier to show her experimenting with her chaos magic and psychokinesis. As she tries to help, the chaos could become overwhelming for her, causing her powers to spike unintentionally. Watching from the sidelines, Peter might feel a mix of jealousy and concern, especially as he sees her growing closer to Bruce/Wanda during the session. The chaos could escalate from floating pillows to something more dramatic, like a glass panel cracking or a table shifting unexpectedly.
Suggestion #3: What if Peter sneaks the reader out of the compound one night and takes her web-swinging around the city? Since she's been stuck inside for so long, I think it'd be a really cute way for them to bond and let her experience New York for the first time.
Anywho, I hope you like these suggestions and love your work. ♥️
Anon you have a big brain 🧎🏻♀️
I already wrote a different scene where Suggest #1 takes place, so I may have to revisit and rewrite!
And I’ll definitely keep the other two in mind when I’m writing!
THANK YOUUU!!!!! ♥️
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