Let's see, concrit: I think one thing I'd suggest is to try and condense the word count on each thread. Long replies are amazing, but sometimes I think what you'll say in 20 words what could be said in 5--try and find the most effective word, and if it feels like you're repeating yourself, just cut it ^^ It's a balancing act though because sometimes more words can actually be better than fewer. Just experiment with it and see what ends up working best!
Oh, also, sometimes you’ll have Maedhros begin a thought and end it abruptly. Realistically it’s how people speak and think, but maybe try extending it enough so the reader knows what the rest of the thought was going to be, because it might seem obvious to you and it’s less obvious when it’s clipped in the actual text. (Sorry, this one seems antithetical to my last ask, and obviously you’re doing very well overall especially when English isn’t your first language! c:)
//First of all I wanted to thank you for having taken the time write this messages, this kind of feedback is extremely useful to anyone who writes. Thank you!*bows*
