Peer Feedback:
In the first post titled "Final Thoughts", I am discussing my data analysis and findings in previous slides, however my tone seems more focused towards the content creator and not the academic audience. Are there any suggestions you have for shifting the text and its tone more towards readers and a college academic essay?
The next slide is my conclusions on the audience analysis portion of the powerpoint. Again the tone could be tweaked a bit, although I need to include more images to show proof of the key takeaways from the analyzed content. Any suggestions of images I could incorporate to help support these conclusions and strengthen the slide?
Lastly, I am struggling with organizing my appendix portion of the essay, what are others doing to make this page neater, and easy to navigate and read through? Are you putting it within a separate document or located just after you conclude the essay?
Thank you and good luck to all !!!