Deepest desires was pretty good! Yas, somebody took the time travel prompt! Confused Aaron was there and everything. I'm hyped for that. Sure there was a few spelling mistakes, but that didn't faze me. The writing was fluid, and I like how you chosen to send all three of the AAA girls back. Nice little detail. Am a bit iffy about the 'alternative timeline' part, but could learn to roll with it. Can't wait for chapter 2!?













