This is my formative, i realised i hadnt uploaded it yet. The feedback is also on here too.

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This is my formative, i realised i hadnt uploaded it yet. The feedback is also on here too.
This was the a collage one that i started working. I instantly wasn’t really feeling it so i abandon it. But i thought it may be good just to add to show another approach to things. It was gonna be a collage about me but i think rerouting to go with the jar was the better idea. Which in itself was also a rerouting because my photoshop crashed and not working. Otherwise i would of done some photomanatage.
This is the process work of one of my illustrations that i forgot to put it up on here. The bottom part is the analogy part which has been done using black indian inks and the top one is the photograph that i was using as reference to do this illustration.
feedback from formative
1: -hyperphoto real - limelight
Good repetition
Good bright colors
2: - good use of mixed media
3: - good use of light
Inviting good use of line and solid black.
Hand Drawn light works well .
change to facing pages
interesting photo-real like illustration, nice repetition, nice bright colours, great use of mixed media and lighting. Hand-drawn working really well.
Think contining on i will definitly focus on doing vector illstration as that seems to be what was responded more postivaly too. As i thought the first on last where the better one. So the plan is too continue on with the bright fun colours of first illstration and then in the style of the the last. Im not sure if i will turn it into type again as i dont know how well it comes across. But i will continue on with vector realistic with working on lighting too.
This is what my design system for the brief
These are my first two page I have mostly done for the assessment. They are not all the way there but they give a good idea of layout and i have tried to balance it so the side descriptions match the astheic of the illatration but have keeped they type faces the same to create unit across the pages
these are just some more notes but I though that i would post them. They show a bit more into my own process of making which to be completey honest is a bunch of planning and then making one or two different versions. Which my type as image one i dont think there will be two many iterations fully made as i have been mainly doing plans like this for it. Orignally i was going to do it anology but i think i will switch to digtal as it is easier.
This is one of my illstration i may mix it up a bit. But its a type as a image. I love this piece. Its meant to show as still life with pistically saying still life.
After deciding to switch to the orignally compostion again, i tried it out with people. As much as it is a cool image i dont think it quite convays what i want. So i think I might still to the first one and this might be a prefect example where i should proply stop.