I’m thinking about making a comic of my unfinished book, I’ve made one page but I just don’t like it..my lines are thin and my artwork is inconsistent and always changing , I love your pages and was wondering if you could give any tips?
also I rlly love your backgrounds
my advice is genuinely just keep making it. Just keep trucking.
I did not like my pages when I started making comics and the style was also REALLY inconsistent because I was still fairly new to digital art and kept finding out new things I could use (found out about layer modes like halfway through the comic and went hod on them) and experimenting. But I just kept trucking. At least for me what was most important about my first comic was just seeing it done. It was more about proving to myself that I could finish something over like...perhaps the necessary quality (and oh boy. does the quality not show). But for a first comic, I don't think it really matters. No one's going to make the perfect comic (which doesn't exist) on their first go around.
if you want some advice on panel layouts/page flow/comic language/etc, I recommend Scott McCloud's books "Understanding Comics" and "Making Comics". If you saw that trend going around a while ago that was like "would you take me as serious if I drew myself like this?", it's from these books.
There is also the tried and true method of looking at other people's work and studying it. Like, for example, I find my panel layouts/page comps to be pretty lacking sometimes, so I'll look at layouts of people's work I admire and see what they do to spice it up and try to incorporate some of those elements into my own work.
Pages from Cry Havoc, Ophidia, and Pareidolia respectfully