Hello Queen, could I make a wierd drawing request? Basically a redesign is what I'm looking for this young lady Tsubaki Yayoi, her surname sounds like Yaoi, most of her siblings died young in noble not!mage curse biz, she's raised besides an adopted crazy ice hero boy Jin that was possesed by the big villain into killing most of his orphanage and her best friends are a Squirrel girl Makoto and the partial incarnation of the Goddess that also happends to he ice boys oprhanage sister Noelle.
She's kinda shy, low self-esteem and reserved, having to be effectively possesed herself to attempt vengance against them after they leave her to side with the anti-hero of Blazblue Ragna, that also butchered many of her comrades in not!Magic nuclear reactors(that unware to them and Tsubaki, would've brought about the end of the world)
This is Tsubaki Yayoi though this are school clothes she is an adult by the time of the story. Maybe it has something to do with the org that she's loyal to basically being an overworld spanning not!Magical Library.
This is her standard combat gear, in the mobile game she gained a dimension traveling samurai power armor changing her casual outfit to this...
Would it be alright to ask you for a redesign of it?
okay so considering the people she’s around i wanted to make her seem just as capable even with her low self esteem
the longer skirt to mirror her school uniform, with boots to show that she can keep up in battle
her skirt i made the same color as her combat gear, including all the gold as a tie in
i wanted her to look like a more realistic version of her coat so i played around with the length of the coat to give her a more interesting silhouette
considering that the og coat and corset made no sense to me, i split them into two pieces that she can take on and off
i placed the same eye motif in her ponytail as a reference to the eye in her hat (unsure of lore reasons but i think it would make sense)
i also made an alternative version
instead of a skirt and tights, she gets large pants
keeping the silhouette and the dark colors on her legs
i also out the corset on top of the coat in this design to make it more visually interesting
i wanted her to give off the feel of a knight and guard who simply doesn’t wear a traditional uniform