Parallax Error: behind the fic
Finally, I’m gonna talk about this fic ➡️ (Parallax Error) and what led to the writing of my admittedly most deranged fic ever.
Basically, the fic’s foundation is: “What if Danchou was literally a “black hole”?”
And core to that thought is this particular description of a “singularity” being the center of a black hole:
From Britannica (https://www.britannica.com/science/black-hole)
I also spent an ungodly amount of time looking at this artist rendition of a black hole (https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Anatomy_of_a_Black_Hole.jpg). Among other things. Like browsing Wikipedia, Britannica, and even NASA gallery
Disclaimer: while I did base a lot of these upon science concepts, it was not my goal to be scientifically accurate to the nitty-gritty (after all, at its core, this fic is still rooted in fantasy). Moreover, a lot of these don’t completely or consistently elaborate on a soup concept—basically, I’m just throwing whatever meta bullshit I can think of into the cauldron. Be warned.
(the rest, including my thought process, under the cut!)
I. The Black Hole Theory of Danchou
So, what the fuck exactly am I talking about?
Hear me out: Danchou is a black hole, and all that entails.
Let me go about the steps of the thought process, as incoherent my brainwaves may be:
I.1. Singularity is the center of a black hole. I.2. Danchou is a singularity.
That which pierces through all timelines, timespace textures thingy. Like an axis
I.3. [zero escape music starts playing] Danchou is the center of a black hole 🡺 [extends that further] Danchou is a black hole---- HEAR ME OUT
Danchou, like a black hole, drags everything in their vicinity into “orbit” (or rather, territory/domain of canonicity); Events™️ keep on happening around Danchou because they just…attract them. And it also happens with characters, who, once they have “interacted” with Danchou (or the Observer, or the “Journal”), are now permanently inscribed in the records of the observer
I.4. The event horizon of a black hole is “a boundary beyond which events cannot affect an outside observer”; ‘nothing that enters a black hole can get out or can be observed from outside the event horizon”;
I.4.a. More or less, as it is also the namesake of that one tvtropes thing, the event horizon is the point of no return I.4.a.i. Fun tangent: Event Horizon is one of the chapter titles in GBVS (the final chapter of Vanilla actually) I.4.b [Refer to image again] The event horizon is the radius around the Singularity. It is roughly the area or domain from which, once something has entered, it can no longer escape.
[Refer to I.3] If such things keep on happening around Danchou, and characters inevitably get pulled into canon/records against their will, THEN [slams desk, Ace Attorney-style] Danchou’s Event Horizon must be their Field of Vision! [Objection!!!] What about recruitable characters, or fate episodes, in which Danchou was not present?? It does not make sense! [slams desk] It cannot be the Main Character’s—the Singularity’s—field of vision! [AAAAArgh!] But… it cannot be denied! These things happen by chain reaction from past-and-future because the Singularity exists! The Main Character—! (Case in point: The «Amplification Factor» passive skill of the Singularity! [Screeching] That is not relevant to the current argument!) [browsing papers] but the previous point still stands. It is not always the case that Danchou is present! Therefore— [Hold it!!!] Consider, what if it’s not the character “Danchou” themself? What if it was…someone else? Someone that still, by some definition, is the Main Character? [Argh!] You can’t possibly mean?? [Smug face] The Singularity = the Main Character = Danchou = The Player = God … And we know by now that multiple timelines exist, and some characters, notably, Danchou, can observe multiple timelines. You «You» must be seeing this, too. There is one person—nay, ONE AND MANY—who can see Everything regardless of said event’s or character’s non-existent interaction with Danchou at any given time: [POINTS FINGERS] THE PLAYER!
I.4.d. Yep. The Player is the Absolute Observer. And then apply the transitivity property to arrive at Danchou again. Further support that by proposing a Version of Danchou that has seen everything.
I.4.e. PROFIT: Danchou has an Event Horizon. It’s the…undefined yet existing field in which the Observer sees. Once seen, observed, there is no escape— Welcome to Danchou’s realm of canonicity, even if you are a failed timeline I.4.e.i. [Tangent of Seofon’t and nonexistent fantasies having been tainted by the essence of canonicity by the voyeuristic gaze of The Player/God/Absolute Observer]
I.5. Some black holes are born from the collapse of stars at the end of their stellar evolution. Inescapable gravity born out of star expending its fuel, provided there’s enough mass. What if…that mass is equivalent to «data records»? I.5.i. [Insert lore-related soup theory as tangent] Stars «Astrals» are meant to become singularities at the end of their life cycle. But since the stars have chosen stagnation, they have forsaken evolution. And therefore cannot become singularities… or gods. I.5.a. So, that perhaps becomes circular as an argument if I claim that «We» amass data records by being the Singularity, because then, where would the mass needed to precipitate collapse «Ascension» come from? I.5.a.i. I posit, time-space convergence.
I.5.a.i.1. Key assumption: Singularity 🡺= God I.5.a.i.2. The Boundary is where all of time converges. So… it’s a circle. Or a catbox [vomiting soup] HEAR ME OUT. The Egg Short Story.
Also, there was something a friend said about the jp of “Boundary” written in kanji I think, that could also be read as “horizon”. And then the implications, of the unreachable horizon (can be seen, but moves farther away the closer you get). Also…horizon as boundary between sea-and-sky. Much to think about.
I.6. Black holes are like, nothingness. Vibes-wise. And what gets born out of nothingness? Something.
I.6.a. I don’t know exactly what I’m getting at here but “void 🡺 world” I.6.b. God creating Something.
Tangent:
It’s kinda interesting how the Eternals-related skins have Zenith and Azimuth there, yeah?
So yeah, that should be it for Part 1. Next, I would go on to very short overviews of 2 concepts I used for the fic, before going into dissecting the thought process of the Fic itself.
II. The Observer (condensed)
Now I talk about… The Observer.
Yes, this part is very Very important.
The Observer is «You». And «You» are The Player, The Main Character, Danchou, God.
You…observe. LMAO. But seriously, yeah.
To observe is to be observed. To be observed is to be “real”. To observe is to make something “real”.
[insert The Catbox] The moment in which all possibilities can coexist, when the truth is unobserved.
[insert lore-related theory: Time-Space Dimensional Bubbles] I seriously theorize that the Sky and Astral realms overlap like “bubbles”. Imagine, 3D Venn Diagram 🤣
This is how I tried to reason out the inconsistency of Lucifer being described as in the Astral Realm in 10th anni, and Canaan being in the Sky Realm. What if both are true in that… in terms of “absolute” location coordinates(?) they are in the same place, but relatively speaking, it can be a place in the Sky Realm, or a place in the Astral Realm.
This theory is not exactly related to the fic, but the idea of dimensional/reality coexistence does.
[choking on soup 🍲]
If you are God, and you are the Absolute Observer…then your dreams and fantasy are not that different from reality «canon». You Create The World.
III. Parallax Error (condensed)
The error caused by parallax—"a displacement or difference in the apparent position of an object viewed along two different lines of sight.”
Basically, an object’s apparent position shifts depending on from where it is observed.
For the fic itself, I more or less used this concept to present the same Object as different things, simultaneously, by describing it as a different thing in separate instances.
—But of course, with my own bullshit about The Absolute Observer being “the observed” in multiple instances. [Refer to The Egg about being multiple existences at once]
IV. The Fic (Parallax Error)
Here we goooo! Gonna divide this part into sections rather than through process chronology to be more coherent:
IV.A. Core Concept
IV.A.a. Inspiration (in the correct direction? I cannot say)
I was very much inspired by Hellstar Remina (Junji Ito).
Special mention to Soup (Umineko, Zero Escape, Sanhora, among others).
[…] the subject's gaze is always already inscribed into the perceived object itself, in the guise of its "blind spot", that which is "in the object more than the object itself", the point from which the object itself returns the gaze. "Sure the picture is in my eye, but I am also in the picture" […]
IV.A.b. The Plot
IV.A.b.i. Setting
Modern AU – Basically, I have been juggling many modern AUs in my head for a while now (with a substantially larger cast and a lighter tone). And then it just, clicked.
Astronomy – Part of the soup package. The concept was already astronomy, might as well incorporate that into the setting.
IV.A.b.ii. The ‘“Plot”’
IV.A.b.ii.1. Modern AU Danchou, but it’s not actually a Modern AU divorced from canon—this “Modern AU” Danchou is still very much the Singularity of Granblue. To cut to the chase, the protagonist Gran and/or Djeeta, is the same Entity, and is also God.
IV.A.b.ii.1.a. The characters Gran and Djeeta do Not Know they are God. That’s why the “timeline” of the fic begins with the «birth» of God aka, the discovery of a black hole or singularity, and ends with the «death» of Gran/Djeeta 🡺 «awakening» of God from their (humansona’s) dream IV.A.b.ii.1.a.i. To be specific, to align with the type of Singularity they are, their domain of authority as God is “acceleration of evolution”. This is also why the polar star could “speedrun” stellar evolution in the “dreamworlds” or Gran and Djeeta’s «Reality». And why the humansonas (God’s self-inserts) hunger for knowledge, progress 🡺 «Ascension» is inevitable.
IV.A.b.ii.1.b. Gran and Djeeta are fundamentally the same entity; think of them as separate “humansonas” of The Singularity, being in separate yet coexistent timelines—realities, or «dreams».
IV.A.b.ii.1.c. The Observer and Parallax Error
I will elaborate on this in IV.A.b.iii (The Layers), but basically what I’m going for is that the Entity (Danchou/Singularity/God/Observer/You) both acts as observer and observed object, sometimes, in a circular manner (like looking at a mirror), unknowingly.
[Refer to Illustrative Example in IV.A.b.iv.] What happens if a certain observer is aware that there is a singularity at certain coordinates (and as a corollary, that there is a black hole)? What if said observer is unaware that they already are within the black hole’s event horizon (therefore, already inside the black hole)? After all, no one knows what is actually inside of a black hole. What would be the view from the inside looking out? What if YOU were the cat inside the box?
IV.A.b.ii.2. If you realize XXX, it’s already too late. IV.A.b.ii.3. Singularities are like players in the meta-world.
IV.A.b.ii.4. SIDE: DJEETA
Djeeta’s story is a world with no one else, until she brought a certain star fallen from academic and artistic grace (Faasan) into the realm of existence, (and with it, of sentience and sapience). Because he is a star—an object that is not even a being—he is nonexistent in terms of being a creature; Djeeta’s fascination. It is his insistence of being someone who should not Exist and the unignorable incongruent state of affairs (truth of the world) that eventually shatters her worldview «Lie».
No one else exists in this world…but there sure is another character that is referred to that isn’t a star 😉
The redacted letters and choice to name Faa as Lucifaa 😉 (This is not the character I refer to in the previous statement tee-hee)
IV.A.b.ii.5. SIDE: GRAN
Gran’s story is that of a world filled with other people, all of which slowly disappear from existence as he himself forgets them in pursuit of the «Truth» through his astronomy research. All relationships lose value when weighed against The Self «God». And if something is forgotten, unobserved, by God…does it really exist?
Who better to warn of reaching The Truth «Divinity» than a certain blond man?
And yes, the incomplete names, or the letters that are lost were all 😉
IV.A.b.ii.6. Meet me halfway, me. IV.A.b.ii.7. The «Observer» desires to be observed, recognized, known, seen. By anyone, be it a lover, a companion, or ultimately—a father.
IV.A.b.iii. The Layers (Flavor text, Summaries, Notes)
The layers… These are the nested narratives—or rather, the frames used to nest them. All are true. But some are truer than others.
IV.A.b.iii.1. The Locations feat. Non-location Observers [Refer to Illustrative Example in IV.1.2.4 for actual placements]
Here we have the observers 🡺 the observed:
Event Horizon Observatory 🡺 God >The realm of the Narrative. That which proclaims God.
Lartcen Sixa Aronomiclast Strooverbay 🡺 The Sky Realm >I had a hard time combing through all moonspeak in canon to make up my own take for words without official en moonspeak. I’m quite proud of the moonspeak hehe.
Inter-Skydom Astronomical Union Observatory 🡺 The polar star GRDJ ▉0000+0000 >In-universe observatory.
International Space Station Roving Observatory (Ceres Outpost) 🡺 The planet Earth >Our world as we know it.
Djeeta 🡺LC▉ 00Ø𝜝
Gran 🡺 all named characters
God 🡺 Reality >[MSQ Chapter 129-4] A god is the definition of reality. To defy a god is to defy the world itself.
YOU «the girl reading this» 🡺 The fic and all its layers
YOU 🡸 = 🡺 YOU
IV.A.b.iii.2. The Dates
February 29, 2017 🡺 a date that does not exist. But… it should precede March 1, 2017
The passage of time up to 2019 via nonexistent dates 🡺 all of time converges in the Boundary
February 29, 2019, 23:58 🡺 It’s also a fun coincidence that 000 first dropped on February 28, 2019
March 1, 2017 🡺 The Birth of the Singularity «What Makes the Sky Blue» This really is a lovely coincidence. I was taken aback when I saw it while researching. Earlier iterations picked February 29 of various years (2014 for Granblue going live, 2017 for “singularity” mention), ending at a proper leap year but you know how revision goes. I came across this more fun information.
IV.A.b.iii.3. High Concept: I wanted to simulate the idea of the story changing depending on how you look at it. In this case, the hovering will change the SIDE shown. Can also be toggled via clicking for accessibility.
The texts hidden under “readmores”, and the hyperlinks/urls were to give off the vibe of “If you know where to look—"
Buttons were included to simulate the logs of the Event Horizon Observatory. Yes, that Layer. Also, yes. It could also be nth layer 😉
IV.A.b.iii.4. Illustrative Example of what the Fuck I was trying to do with this fic
I drew this a long while ago to explain my Insanity to my friends and I refuse to edit it to something more legible or comprehensible.
Observer A’s location: The Moon
Observer B’s location: Somewhere from beyond—outside the event horizon (In the fic’s case, Ceres)
Blue Circle: The Planet Earth/Sky Realm
IV.A.c. Musings about Canonicity
IV.A.c.i. Existential Pseudo-math | The (non-exhaustive) set of existential values
Canonicity Coefficient: the value describing “in how many timelines or realities do you exist”?
Canonicity Constant: the fixed value determining how similar “you” will be across iterations
Canonicity Quotient: The canonicity coefficient divided by the total number of timelines or realities >Possibly correlated with physical proximity to the Absolute Observer
Validity Coefficient: has 2 determinants (a and b); formula still unknown >Does your existence affect the world state? Will it render a canon timeline (be it MSQ or sidestory) non/existent? >Will your existence influence the birth or existence of the Singularity? If you were/weren’t, will the Singularity not come to be? Will they cease to be?
IV.A.c.ii. Danchou and the Singularity have different existential values. IV.A.c.iii. Walder has a canonicity quotient of 1
IV.A.d. Free Will
– What is «God», the «Singularity», but one with a free will that trumps all others? To bend fate, distort probability—
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IV.B. Pairings
IV.B.a. Faajita
Faasan hates Djeeta. Because she made him real. Because of her free will that overrides his own.
The very fact that he hates her, that he feels his free will, his very Selfhood, is violated, picked apart 🡺 more reason to hate her for making him be.
I WROTE FAASAN TO BE LIKE AN UNHAPPY SELKIE BRIDE
Djeeta, confessing her love to Faa: Lucifer was more beautiful than you. You are an imperfect successor, a disappointment. I think we’re soulmates. [Refer to IV.B.c. for more details]
The only attraction Faasan feels toward Djeeta is gravitational.
I just really wanted him to accuse Djeeta of eating stars.
IV.B.b. GranBabu
To be completely honest, the reason why the other pair became Faajita (when it could be any Danchou) is because at the time of conceptualizing this, I was seeing Granbabu fanworks, so I rolled with it.
[verbatim from a discord convo] Bubs: hell yeah if i gain enough muscle (mass) i will become a Singularity (black hole)
Babuchan desires to be an equal, to be of importance. And Gran cannot give him that because he is in pursuit of something Greater.
IV.B.c. “Faaferu”
[“but Faaferu isn’t tagged?!”] Yes, exactly. Because it isn’t in here. But… it’s also, HERE.
An important aspect to the fic here is at least, for the Faajita SIDE, that Feru is the unseen 3rd “person.” He does not exist in the same plane (physical, existential, narrative) as the characters Lucilius and Djeeta—because he was not incarnated into a humansona.
The entire time, Faasan is pining after him because they cannot be together. He has been torn away from the realm of non-sentience, and away from his twin/triplet star that is Lucifer.
He woke up one day, incomplete in almost every existential sense of the word.
He misses Feru so so much 🥺
Lucifer is the star mythologized, yet somehow the one who wasn’t incarnated and remained a literal star (because Djeeta was more fascinated with the mythos of Faasan, the Demoted One—being demoted from being The Cool™ Star)
This is because Faasan became an object of interest, like Pluto. [wordvomit] “What if he isn’t a star?” 🡺 What drew Djeeta’s attention.
Faa hated being, but he was at least comforted by the thought of Lucifer being designated as «True» by virtue of him being «False»; however, he still disliked the undisproved possibility of Lucio being the «True» One.
[Special Bonus Feature: FORK where Djeeta incarnates Lucifer against Faa’s wishes]
“We can hold hands now,” Lucifer smiles. “We didn’t have hands back then; also, the Roche Limit didn’t allow us.” Lucifaa is still as a statue, unable to process who is in front of him—in the flesh.
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