Image - Expanded Noun Phrases poster created by Grade 4 students
This week I took the opportunity to work with several Grade 4 students within my classroom, where I work as an Integration Aide. Within this group I chose a mixture of ability levels from below, at and above level in the area of Writing. Continuing with the Noun Phrases topic covered within the ECL310 Seminar, and in line with the Victorian Curriculum English: Level 4 content descriptor ‘Understand that the meaning of sentences can be enriched through the use of noun groups/phrases and verb groups/phrases and prepositional phrases’ (VCAA n.d.), I decided to get the students to think about the simple Nouns of ‘Cat’, ‘Tree’, ‘Castle’ and ‘Storm’ and the words they could use to describe each. This activity was derived from the sequence of activities given by Ljungdahl (2014, p. 322-3). Around the pictures, we listed all the words that the students came up with, from simple ideas such as ‘Playful’ for the Cat to ‘Old looking but still standing tall’ for the Castle. While I facilitated the discussion I ensured that I didn’t use any technical language or prompts other than “how could you describe these objects” and “could we use some of these in a sentence to make the object seem more exciting”. I was extremely surprised by the variety of descriptors that the students came up with as they included many types such as appearance, position and number amongst others. When the students began to build sentences, they effectively bounced their ideas off the previous students and ended up with extremely complex sentences that included a variety of descriptors. Without students being given technical language such as ‘determiners’ and ‘prepositions’, they were still able to use these grammatical functions to develop amazing sentences. Hopefully this activity has given the students new skills to improve their writing within the general classroom activities.
References
Ljungdahl, L 2014, in G Winch, R Ross Johnston, P March, L Ljungdahl & M Holliday (eds), Literacy: Reading, Writing and Children’s Literature, Oxford University Press, South Melbourne, Australia, pp. 304-28.
VCAA - see Victorian Curriculum and Assessment Authority
Victorian Curriculum and Assessment Authority n.d., English: Curriculum, Victorian Curriculum and Assessment Authority, retrieved 18 July 2019, <https://victoriancurriculum.vcaa.vic.edu.au/english/curriculum/f-10>














