Jul 18, 2018
them: so how’s writing going?
me: oh, you know, fine
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them: so how’s writing going?
me: oh, you know, fine
it’s painful!! it’s sloppy!! it’s unplanned character development
i was mostly dicking around like “oh well this is a scifi story and you just gotta have an android if you’re writing scifi” and wrote this scene as a way of testing the waters for my antagonists while entertaining the idea of making Harper an android
and then it became the fucking linchpin to my conflict as i unintentionally tied together my basic idea, character motivations, and locked in a few vague scenes that had been nothing but possibility until this point. writing is weird y’all
anyway, have a snippet of Genesis Uprising that is by no means my best work (and very far from being polished lol) but was ultimately surprisingly decent considering that i wrote it at 4am a couple nights ago
context: Genesis has been equipped with hardware that allows her to manipulate a magnetic field surrounding her which is why Harper and Calvin refer to her as ‘the magnet’ -- Gunner, the electric one, has been equipped with similar hardware, though it grants him a different ability. Calvin’s hardware is different, but it allows him to manipulate fire. Calvin and Harper are members of the Government Superhero program (which effectively makes them high-grade, government sanctioned cops) and have been assigned on bringing in Genesis and Gunner for their vigilante work.
“So, our favorite magnet lets pride lead her way,” Harper observed. “No metal on her person; nothing to save her in the event that her environment does not provide her the tools she needs.”
Calvin shrugged. “Hasn’t been a problem for her so far.”
“Is that so?”
It was the way she said it, the smug certainty doused with bland condescension, that made Calvin hesitate. “I- I don’t think it has.”
“Mm, yes, that is the issue, isn’t it?” Harper continued to watch the blasted criminal tear through the roadway, unconcerned by the destruction raining indiscriminately from shattered concrete and bent pipelines. “You don’t think. Our magnet is rash, and she gets herself into trouble more often than you’ve reported. See there—” Harper pointed to an underpass “—there is her accomplice, the electric one. If you had made a habit of studying your quarry, surely you would have noticed the trend in his behavior by now.”
Calvin began to speak, stuttered over the words on his tongue. Scowling, he tried again: “He’s hard to keep track of.”
“Is he now?” Harper tutted in that discomfiting, almost-human way of hers. “He is preparing to throw our dear magnet a prop. It should land- yes! Right now.”
Skeptical of his skepticism, but unable to sway the doubt from his mind, Calvin watched the underpass. There was nothing of note happening — hell, Calvin still hadn’t seen the electric douche in the underpass, wasn’t sure he was even there — but Harper had an annoying habit of being right. One of the benefits of an artificial mind, he supposed.
Seeing nothing, Calvin asked, “What exactly am I looking for?”
Harper glared at him. “Did you not see that- nevermind, of course you didn’t. Just wait. Watch the hedge situated three feet from the road. Our magnet is headed right that way.”
“Huh,” Calvin said. “Guess there isn’t much metal to that side of the road…”
Harper didn’t respond, so Calvin watched the hedge.
Debris rising in her wake, the magnet dove to the side, careening into the asphalt. Boulder closed the distance, his enhanced musculature propelling him forward at ungodly speeds. From this distance, reading body language was near-impossible, but Calvin could have sworn he’d seen the magnet smile.
But why? There wasn’t metal anywhere near enough to her to be of benefit; for all purposes, she was trapped.
The hedge shuddered. Metal glinted through its unnaturally green leaves. Clods of dirt shot through the tidily shorn branches — and Calvin understood.
Rising into the air, the magnet pushed herself forward, directly into Boulder’s charge. With enviable precision, she yanked herself around Boulder. Then flipped in the air. Sunlight flashed off of her dagger and—
—Boulder screamed. He reached around to pull the dagger from his back, tried to dislodge her from his shoulder, struggled to remove his arm from her reach. It was useless.
She pulled another dagger from a sheath on her thigh and wrapped her legs under Boulder’s shoulder and around his neck, locking him in the vulnerable position. Calvin looked away. He knew what happened next.
Screams, pain. Agony, as she dug her dagger into Boulder’s arm and extracted the implant that gave him his strength.
“Don’t you see?” A white, opaque film glazed Harper’s eyes. “Our little magnet has a guardian angel.”
“What’s that matter?” Calvin snapped. Below them, Boulder whimpered. “She got him.”
Harper shrugged. “Another loss for the greater good. Had Boulder not been so forward thinking, we would have missed out on this wonderful opportunity.”
Just count, Calvin. Ten. That’s all you gotta count to. Can’t go decommissioning another android just because she— Fuck. “You let Boulder die.”
“Yes,” Harper said. “So did you.”
Heat bubbled beneath his palm. Calvin growled.
“Oh hush.” Harper leveled him with her inhuman, white-glazed eyes. “If you will excuse me, I must look into our electric friend. It would seem that he, and not the magnet, will be the key to restoring order within the city.”
ooohmygod me @ me let gunner rest please
thsi is only the first chapter god please somebody stop me