#hero king

[jaebae3030]

I've been trying to create this story for years and recently started writing. This is the first chapter (most of it rather) and I want to see if there's any changes that could be made...

[reunionandthen]

i'm tired

[lunarwagi24]

Hero King Rambles #2

It's so hard not to edit as I'm writing, but it's good to hold back. The only thing I've done is I went back and rewrote something because I'm like wait a second what purpose does this scene serve? So I went back and got rid of it because it was a relic of the previous idea.

But I shouldn't really do that... I only did it cause it was as I was writing the scene and I'm like huh??? this doesn't make much sense??? Any other time I'd just make a note on the side or cross something out but that's it really.

I haven't really gotten any work done on the story other than that cause I've been sleeping a lot and getting distracted by other things. But I guess I'll write it in due time...

[lunarwagi24]

Hero King rambles #1

Why is it that I can only work on Hero King at my old place? Is it I get too distracted at home?

Hmm perhaps I should start writing in other places and stuff cause I really wanna write but god is it hard to get it out right now.

But anyways regardless, maybe I should start numbering these rambles as I think I'll talk about the plot and my changes in these.

Well first change I think is pretty big is I had always imagined that Vern, the first protag, was coming to one of the cities (Dor'ness) to find the rebellion since his mom and village was destroyed. But my new thought is instead what if work was scarce in the village, and his mom was getting sicker due to the weather or something and so he went to the city for work. From there he ends up entangled in the rebellion and having his eyes opened to the tyranny of the current king.

Alric on the other hand is still a dick. Nothing has changed there. His memories of his past life are still fuzzy but he knows that the current kings ancestor stole the throne from him and erased him from existence so his reason for being a part of the rebellion is literally because to take back what he believes is his and/or get revenge. He has no idea of why he was killed or anything.

That part works really well because it explains why Alric isn't as evil as he used to be and why he isn't super op right from the start. He doesn't remember all his magic and he doesn't remember a lot of stuff. He probably isn't as strong yet because he lost his reservoir of blood and muscle strength due to being brought back to life.

Now I just really need to sort of focus on the middle and the events that happened. I'll need to touch up the events in the start for sure that get the ball rolling, but the middle is really what I'm lacking. I have an idea of things I want but I haven't really planned it out.

I have a bunch of little thoughts swimming about, but I'll get to that soon I guess.

I think that's all I really have right now, I'll try and make another post tomorrow perhaps to force myself to think and plan for my story. Or at least to work a little on the story.

[reunionandthen]

@ikemarth i don’t remember what prompted this but i think you were meant to see it

[hero-king-baybe]

haurcherex featuring hero from the final fantasy series

[soval45]

Happy 30th to the Fire Emblem series! I’m late with it but I wanna celebrate it regardless since it’s a series near and dear to my heart. I’m incredibly grateful to the series for introducing me to such a giant cast of colorful and wonderful characters with their own stories to tell. Here’s to many more!