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Okay full edits are done.
I think I have 3 people reading these, Jade, Croft and Locke. I mainly want opinions on grammar and how the emotions come through and yeah I'm basically using you three to improve my own writing. :) Suck it.
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Okay full edits are done.
I think I have 3 people reading these, Jade, Croft and Locke. I mainly want opinions on grammar and how the emotions come through and yeah I'm basically using you three to improve my own writing. :) Suck it.