The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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This is the information about Norbiton industrial area now and plan of the future development.
The industrial area nowadays only consists of eight factories, a farmland on the side of the river and a town on the west side. The area is considered simple as of now. There is nothing significant of the area.
For a development, this Norbiton industrial area will be changing into a housing area. The housing will not only placed on the previous factories. There will be some of them across the river. Therefore, a bridge is a must to build to cross the river.
The farmland will remain as it is, with some reduction of area. The town of the west will remain the same. In addition, there will be shops, playground, medical centre and school to accommodate the people who lives on the planned future housing area.
Total: 143 words.
Corrections:
This is the information about Norbiton industrial area now and the plan of for the future development.
The industrial area nowadays only consists of eight factories, a farmland on the side of the river and a town on the west side. The area is considered simple as of now. There is nothing significant of in the area.
For a development, this Norbiton industrial area will be changing into a housing area. The housing will not only be placed on in the previous factories. There will be some of them across the river. Therefore, a bridge is a must to build to cross the river.
The farmland will remain as it is, with some reduction of area. The town of the west will remain the same. In addition, there will be shops, a playground, a medical centre and a school to accommodate the people who lives on in the planned future housing area.
