Mar 3, 2024
Okay nah
Shit hit the fan
The fanfic I was reading for a light chuckle at how clunky it was just got past the amusingly bad straight into just... bad
Every good idea or the idea that at least was in the presence of a good idea is getting thrown out the window for no reason
Any point that could be a good hook to build some suspension is in and out in less than two sentences
There's literally no point in making the main couple have like 10 year age gap with the mc being 16 (yes, that fact was not brought up for about 18 chapters, but there were red flags I'll admit.)
I'm just frustrated.
