scorcherthebushbaby and lemursofdayandnight
Before I go on to say anything, note that I am saying this honestly. I know you're a good roleplayer and you can achieve great things. However I do believe there is still some work to be done, not just for your characters but as a roleplayer in general. Know that I have NOTHING against you, I just want to help you. Kay? Alright —
Character in general:Lemursofdayandnight: Since this is a Multi-Muse blog and I can't generally pint point which character is which. I say all of your characters are the same. No matter which Muse approaches Blaze I feel like even if it's a different name I will always get the same bland forgettable character. Give me different personalities, contrast and colour. Piss Blaze off or make her grin and laugh, I don't care. But your characters are way to bland to remember.Scorcherthebushbaby: This character kind of pisses me off. And I don't mean like it manages to piss of my Muse, I mean it genuinely pisses me off. You have to make a character a likeable jerk if that's the angle you are going for. Scorcher is just a jerk, period. There's no likeability if all he is doing is going around and flirting with Blaze. You got to make me like him, I don't care if Blaze hates him in the end. I THE READER HAVE TO LIKE HIM!How they play them:Lemursofdayandnight: They are way to bland to remember, there is no difference between one or the next. Try to spice them up, they can be different characters and still be awesome.Scorcherthebushbaby: Is just a unlikable jerk. I can't say too much because you don't give our characters time to develop between each other. If you want me to like your character you gotta make him a likeable jerk. Give him reasons for his actions.The Mun: Since they're both the same mun, I'll address like it's both. Though I don't know the mun personally I know they're a great person. Very approachable and easy to talk with. It the characters that throw me off but over all the mun is very easy going.
RP with them: I have Want to RP with them: If you take time to develop your characters I could see us plotting in the future. But for now — I'm sorry to say no.
Overall Opinion: Your characters need major development before you can become a good roleplayer. Spice up some of your characters but not just by giving them personality. Give them reason behind their motives. And don't going into exposition in a narrative. Let me feel the develop through characters actions and words.