whom here wants to beta an incomplete lance/matt fic

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whom here wants to beta an incomplete lance/matt fic
So either I wrote complete garbage or I made their brain's crash because so far all people want to focus on is "I had breakfast with P'Kim this morning is all." At the end of my fic.
Is this good? Bad? Idk? I don't get it.
Quote from what I'm writing
I̴̮͌̃͌̿ ̴̯̮͙̝̬̦͓͗̾̇̍̕ͅͅg̴̢̘̠̬̩̲̱̙̒͗͌̒͜͝ŭ̴͍̝͓͎̂̄͊͒̎̔̓̕ḙ̸͔̭͈̰̈́̈́̈̊́͒͝ͅs̸̤͓̹̺̝͖̱̐ͅs̸̰̥̘͙̹̱̝̀͒͜ͅ ̸͖̪́͊̄̆̇̆͠I̷̡̜̯͎̜̰̓̈͌͌̂͊͐͊̈́̚ ̸͙̦̟͍̀͘͝b̸͖͚̲̓ë̷̯̳̩́͒͊̀͑́͋́̕͜ͅc̸̢̥̩̤̘̽a̷̲͚̺͖̘̺̓͋̏̂͊m̸̟̺̣̲̪̠͇̋͘ę̶̬̼̰̟̪̻̙͌͐̎̄͌̕͝ͅ ̶̬̈̓̽ͅş̴̰͖̰͉͚̖̜̮͚̋͒̊̔̄̀̒̔ơ̵̼̦̭̔̌̾̽̀̐͘͝͝ ̷̛̱̲͊̽̆̌̒̋̈́̚͝n̵̡̖̤̻̝͚̰̝̈̔e̴̩̗͑̿͜r̷̤̮͕̼͚͉̟̫̒̇̍͛̅v̴̻̯͎̼̱̑̎̇͆́ò̴̈̀̓̃̐͘͜u̸͍͕̅̍̅̆̀̚͝s̷͚͖̺̭͎̫̲̒ ̷͕̭͙̱͉̹̺͚͔̩̚ṭ̵̰̲̘͗̊̏̈́̏̚͘h̵̤͍̦̏̕a̷͍̫̪̦̤̿̿̍̒͘͜t̷̮̦̘͓̬̣͎̣͙̫͂̇̑͊̕̚͝ ̵̧̩͎̂I̵͚̩͔̞̬̐͗͋̀̐̾ ̶̨͆̑ư̷̢̞̹̮͍͕̱̣̺͉̌ŝ̸͈̤̫̣̮̪͎͍̰̘́͐̄́̍̓e̸̬͇̼̙̣̞͌̈́́̆̓̿͐̚̕ͅd̴̨̹̤̪͇͛̾͌͗̂̎̈́̐́͂ ̷̩̙͈̣̟̮̞͛̑̀̆̑̌t̷̰̦̝̼̬̲͐̾h̸̡͉͔̻͉̳̖͙͆̍͘e̴͚̪̅͝ ̸͙̗̤̟̳͂̍̀̑́͂͂͜w̶̡̨͖̯͖̖͕͖͑͗̑̑̾̈́͠r̴̨̨̪͙̗̈́̀̎̀̍̀̂̎̂̍͜ỏ̵͙͙̗̦̙̥͐̆͂͗̚n̷̟̲̩͙̒͐̌̕g̵̘̮̪͙̍̎̈́̑̀ ̸̨̰̟͚̳͎̜̳̭͌̃̕ͅl̴̡̛̲͕̪̤͙͍̓͒̄͆̀͐͐͠a̴̘̱̟̦̥̳̬̟̪̾̾̐̐͒̈̈̊̈́̚ͅn̴̦̏͂͋͆̆̆́͝ģ̴̧̨͙͖̩̹͍̪̤̎̓͗̉u̵̢̯̣͖̯̜͐́͒̅͗̈ḁ̷̡̳̼̰̯̭͇̂̏̈́̃͗͛̒͆̊͝ǵ̶͕̪̣͈͉̰̞̠͎̈́̐̀͝e̷̢̫̤͚͕͙̩̰͗̊̌͜.̶͍͔͓̎̈́͌̐̽̑̋.̸̡̡̢̨̺̭͖͔̥͒͛̋̆.̴̩̎͑͋̈́̈́̽̈̓̕͝
im literally always on mobile with this website so to whoever looks at my actual blog I apologize I dont even know what it looks like anymore
Have you manage to sneak into one of the Cogs' Headquarters?
“that was fresh out of the toontorial... not one of our best moments... but yes, i have.”
a little something extra since i havent updated in awhile.
guest staring @toontowntelepathy as captain zilly snifflepocket
When she tells you she’s sick,
Don’t ignore her,
Saying “it’s just a cold”
Because it is a fever
A fever that burns for days without acknowledgement
Because no one believed her illness
When she falls unresponsive
Don’t say she is being irresponsible
Because she is too lazy to help herself
She can’t do it because her temperature has now hit a new low
A low that you can’t get up from
One that sends you to bed unable to get out for anything
One where you cannot even take care of yourself
Let alone all the of your expectations
No one knew that you could be so sick without someone realizing
When you find her gone
Don’t cry and say “I wish she had gotten help”
Because she yelled for you
She screamed for attention
And you would have helped her If it were a “real sickness”
Don't cry for your ignorance.
So if anybody would be willing to take sometime out of their day/night to read this quick chapter of an AU I just whipped up that would be super awesome of you and I would probably love you forever but you won't know for sure unless you read it and tell me what you think