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I'm going to expand the Demon World arc. They won't visit every one of the Kingdoms, just like in the original the Demon Sorcerers figure out what's going on and make their final stand at No Man's Land, but Clan Chan will be spending more time in them because I have a lot of world building ideas about the Demon Sorcerer's territories I want to explore when I get there.
Some examples:
Dai Gui's kingdom has a massive pit and underground tunnel system where he spends most of his time, along with many human workers who mine for treasures that Dai Gui digs up, mostly from older civilizations in his territory that were destroyed when the tunnels collapsed. Dai Gui himself is rarely seen on the surface and his return is actually celebrated by the people that live in his territory since he mostly ignores them and lets them govern themselves.
Tso Lan doesn't have a kingdom on Earth at all, he has colonies carved out of his siblings' territories (In my head, I've been calling them things like Fire-Lunar Colonies, but that may change when I get there) that are governed by human council members who report to him on the Moon about what is happening in his territories so he can make any final decisions about what to do, and also basically spying on the other Demon Sorcerers for him.
Xiao Fung's kingdom is fairly okay to live in too, since he makes an effort to be a good ruler, he doesn't understand all of human needs and limitations but he doesn't hoard resources like some of his siblings do and does more to negotiate trades with them for what his kingdom needs than any of the others. The biggest thing to worry about is his death tournaments, participants are selected at random and their families are compensated for their loses based on how amusing Xiao Fung found them in the tournament. Winners are granted a wish from him 'within reason' which just means that if Xiao Fung doesn't like the request he'll kill them himself.
If you have to live in Demon World, these are the best territories to live in because Dai Gui, Tso Lan and Xiao Fung don't really care about exerting their power over the humans.
There's also a lot of in fighting among the Demon Sorcerers, its part of why the Immortals were able to defeat them originally, and why Clan Chan is able to defeat them again.
