I made the phone bigger and decided to make the grey square smaller, so the phone would look like it’s coming out of the square. For the text, I kept the same font and color, but I made it a little bit bigger and aligned it with the square on the background. I also wanted to make the text look like it was coming out of the screen, so I added a clipping mask and I also kept the reflection, but I only left the letter “o” to increase the 3D sense on the rest of the text. Instead of the “obsession with data” I tried a different approach for the concept, now it’s more about the obsession with our phones, social media, and fitting in society according to what the brands say we should feel and look like.