Hi everyone! I'm currently writing a kidlit book and I would love to have a few beta readers!
This is meant to be a chapter book for young readers (so about ages 7-12, probably leaning more on the younger side of this range), inspired by Daisy Meadows and Gwyneth Rees' Rainbow Fairy and Fairy Dust series respectively.
I would be happy to get some feedback and critique on this piece, especially since this is the first kidlit book I've written! You'll be reading off a google doc for this, and I'll make sure you have the ability to leave comments on the piece as well so you can leave your feedback there.
Title: Sadie And The Search For The Missing Necklace (working title, subject to change for the final product later on)
Genre: Kidlit/Fantasy
Word count: 7528
Short synopsis: After losing her grandma's necklace, Sadie must work together with a fairy named Pearl in order to find it. But can Sadie learn to trust Pearl as they continue working together, or will her doubts about others keep them from finding the necklace at all?
Desired feedback: Overall impressions, impressions about plot and characters, worldbuilding, and any other questions you might have.
Deadline: No later than Jan. 20th, 2023!
Please IM me if you're interested and/or want more details! Thank you in advance for your interest and happy reading!












