Started reading Life after death by @ bittenred because everyone talk about it. The writing is good but everything pisses me off so fucking much. What Lance is feeling isn't love, he is fucking dependent on Keith and that is so ugly and toxic. He looks like an empty shell that can only says keith keith keith. The way he is feeling about Keith is way too extreme to be called love. It is dependency and it is not cute, like not cute at ALL. He has no personality. He looks like a baby crying for his mother. That ain't cute. I'm sticking with the story because I hope it will be good because the writing is very nice but otherwise? Reading it makes my blood boil. Lance is not a person anymore, just a broken record who can only think about Keith. He looks pathetic. He's dependent on him and that's so so so so so fucking unhealthy. I hate it with passion. I loved the idea but the execution is a big no.














