@wylmelvar
Alternia or Beforus or some type of AU:AU of Alternia where instead of HIC or Trizza rules, it’s ruled by a younger empress who runs it bad. Same problems applies.
Oo, did the new young empress manage to defeat HIC and take over? That could be Really fun, playing around with an inexperienced empress who’s just walking in her predecessor’s footsteps, clumsily.
Name: Krasni Bonfac (Krasni is ’“red” in Russian and Bonfac came from Andres Bonifacio, a revolutionist in the Philippine Revolution. He leads a group called “the Katipunan” and their colors are red and white. She’s mostly based on revolutionists and rebel stuff.)
Oh you really anglicized красный for that name. When I looked up Krasni, I also found out it was the Slovenian word for Beautiful/Fine, and when used in some contexts it means First-Class People. I’ve also found some, uh… tenuous connections between the name Krasni and Serbian dictator supporters. So I don’t know if this is the beeest choice for a rebel character’s name.
Maybe Luksem instead? As a reference to Rosa Luxemburg, a highly influential revolutionary socialist who was, on top of being imprisoned 3 times for revolutionary actions, executed for trying to start an uprising.
Luksem Bonfac.
Age: 7 sweeps
Strife Specibus: fistkind, bolokind
Like a bolo bat??! Just kidding, I’m guessing you mean a bolo knife, but you can just call it knifekind for that… Fistkind is fun, but being entirely unarmed is usually associated with void players, and I think a better option might be a Flagkind instead? A nice white and red flag that she whacks people with. So knifekind and flagkind!
Fetch Modus: ????
Since she’s interested in history, maybe a history modus where she has to recite the origin of the item in order to obtain it?
Blood color:Teal
Symbol and meaning:Ligo, The Circumscribed (Prospit, Space)
I’d argue she’s Librist, but we’ll talk about that later.
Trolltag: (i need help with this one)
How about martialReformist? It’s a reference to the martial arts interest and her revolutionary nature, but is also a reference to the idea that she’s probably anti-war and also a prison reformist (or even abolitionist) because of her experiences.
Quirk: Types in lowercase but capitalizes SOME WORDS for EMPHASIS. Starts sentences with ( ). Whisper/hides text with [( )]. She sound like YELLING A LOT.
//Quirk has relation with sign since it means restricting something.
( it looks like THIS. IS THIS EVEN LEGIBLE? )
[( i hide text like this. )]
You don’t know how tempted I am here to actually suggest that she not use any capitals at all, because- because anti-capitalism do you like my joke— But no, capitalizing can be a really good way to emphasize things.
Maybe she could organize sentences like pamphlets?
Subheadings to her messages in caps, framed by |_’s, and caps for emphasis.
Ex: |_EMPRESS CRUELTY_| news has broken of empress utilizing drones to RAZE coastal cities.
Special Abilities (if any): none, aside from enhanced strength after training a lot.
Lusus: a large monkey-eating eagle with 4 eyes and is lion-sized
It’s a WHAT…. I know now that that’s what Philippine Eagles are called but reading this ALARMED ME… Anyways that’s a good pick.
Personality: Krasni is persuasive enough to let other trolls join her cause and can lead people well. She can be brutally honest that it makes her look tactless and can be aggressive and grumpy at times (unintended). She keeps up the facade that she’s strong but inside she’s a little broken after getting imprisoned. Can rebel in forms like clothing and even violent ones.
Rebellion Is Fun. Imprisonment is not… I think if you want to do this, you should definitely research into how imprisoned rebels experience their prison sentences and find some interviews about them talking about their lives afterwards! But I like her character a lot. Make sure to flesh out her exact goals- what Exactly is she rebelling against? What does she want to change? How does she get people to join her?
Interests: revolutions, martial arts, history, persuasion, illegal works, law, the rebellions of the Sufferer and the Summoner, rebel stuff
What kind of rebel stuff? Is she interested in rebel warfare, or is she more politically inclined?
Title: (undecided since I didn’t intended to make most of my ocs play Sgrub but please do suggest)
Hmmm. You’ve definitely been inclined towards a space player here, but I think she might actually be a time player? Time players are the sort who are the strong rebels, the ones who are fighting against things. So it feels like that’d fit her better, too, especially if you want to keep her prospit.
She is ppprobably an Heir of Time? Passive inheritor, the changer, one with time. It helps her be a good leader/influencer.
Land: Land of Barriers and Frogs
I have to steal her frog because I took away her space title, so she might instead be the Land of Barriers and Escape. Escape is a reference both to her prisony background And the escape wheel of a clock. Maybe her planet could be a big clockwork prison.
Dream Planet: Prospit
(o please do help since i made this on the spot except for some stuff)
Design:
There wasn’t much I wanted to edit about her character design, so I’ll try to be brief. There was some of that frustrating fuzziness going on, so I cleaned everything up.
Horns/hair: I made the horns more symmetrical. I updated the hair and hair outlines to make things a bit more appealing.
Face: I changed her eye shape just slightly and added heavier eye bags. I adjusted the scar color to be closer to what seems likely because of canon scar representations. I also added a bit of a tongue in her mouth, since it’s so wide open!
Skirt: Patterns aren’t common in troll clothing and it made her visually busy, so I traded it out for just a flat teal skirt. I also got rid of most of the rips for a similar reason.
Legs/cuffs: I added a scar to her leg and adjusted the cuffs a little. I put some dings and scrapes on the cuffs so that they look worn, like they’ve been through trouble, or like she’s tried to break them off.
Thank you for sharing!
-CD