#wylmelvar

[angelic-courting-rituals]

hi im just recently stumbled on your fics and i tell you, i really do love your writing. it's so vivid and beautiful! thank you!

Hi, thanks a lot for the message! I’m also glad for these fortunate little accidents. Happy reading <3 

[tf2playernames]

a medic that i partied with has a medi-gun in backpack named "say 'i'm gay' for uber"

[wireskullarchived]

oh my god thank you for postin the "how to draw medic's hair tutorial" i am finally in peace

np! im glad i could help !

[fantroll-purgatory]

(credits to eternal_galaxys,metalchairz and idk where the other for the hair damn.)

If you remember the other credits please tell us so we can add them! ^_^

FIRST: Alternia or Beforus or some type of AU? Beforan Name (preferably include how you came up with it and why): Ernaci (from Erenacinae, the scientific name of hedgehogs) Sozpat (a butchered version of sociopath which is a bit of her. I need to think of better names bc I suck at it.)

Sociopathy is a term that’s been out of circulation for a while because it’s not actually very helpful and has mostly been used to stigmatize mentally ill ppl. Reading what I’ve read of her character, it seems less to me that she’s a standard or stereotypical “sociopath” (not a real thing) and is instead just Low Empathy. …I’m almost tempted to make a Shadow the Hedgehog joke here because of how you’ve described her personality, but I… shall refrain…. Still, it might be worth looking to him for some inspo since you’re hedgehog themeing her!

Either way, if you want to keep a similar sounding name, maybe you could do Schope, as a reference to Schopenhauer, a philosopher who helped establish the idea of the Hedgehog Dilemma. 

Age: 7.5 sweeps

Strife Specibus: needlekind (knitting needles but doesnt use it for knitting.)

Fetch Modus: (none yet)

You could have something like… a quill modus to further drive home the prickly theme. Everything is stored inside a spike ball. She has to reach in to grab it, but if she’s not careful she can get hurt.

Blood color: Indigo

Symbol and meaning: Sagira (Prospit, Mind)

Trolltag: doubleedgedBlabbermouth

Quirk: I actually don’t know aside from perfect caps. also commas instead of periods. Also speaks with some internet lingo. I just don’t know how to incoperate the hedgehog spikes to her quirk lol. Hun,,, you got a big storm coming on you,,,

\You could put spines around all her messages,,,/// <- Like That

Or you could have her use ->->-> When she’s being accusatory.

Special Abilities (if any): Super strength from being an Indigo-blood but doesn’t use it that much.

Lusus: Hedgehog in the size of an adult cat.

Verie Cute. I could make a joke here about like… having a hedgepony, As a hegemony pun. But that’s more of a ‘bluebloods having horse lusii’ joke and not a necessity. 

Personality: Ernaci is that one person who tries not to be an asshole. She is brutally honest (a double-edged sword) that it can hurt others without her knowing. Talkshitting is fine for her since she doesn’t feel bad after doing so. Ernaci has good intentions and ideas, it’s just that she struggles to word shit correctly so she gets misunderstood (put-foot-in-mouth 24/7). She is stuck between being a porcupine and emotionally/physically intimate. Ernaci really tries her best to overcome her flaws but the other side of her doesn’t want to change so she’s stuck again. She has a hard time showing emotions because she suppresses it. She’s also peak hedgehog’s dilemma.

EDIT: also things to add for Ernaci Sozpat: she’s also stuck between not caring about her reputation and actually giving a fuck about it and on asking help or just fucking stay like that forever.

I like this a Lot! You made her a mind character and I think all of this plays really well into that. The identity conflict, the objectivity. Mind players value action over feeling, they’re about the physical and not the spiritual and so that’s definitely something you can do with her. She knows how to Act, she knows how to Think, but she doesn’t know how to feel. And that means that when she gets close to people she can hurt them. 

So this creates a really interesting character dynamic! Desiring to get close but knowing it’s not a good idea but not knowing how to fix it or even if she wants to fix it. Being harsh with others and possibly drawing their criticism because she doesn’t understand feelings. It’s great tension!

As I said above, I also think she’s more low empathy than “sociopathic,” which just means she can’t understand how other people are feeling. It’s something you can research about online for further portrayal!

Interests: gossips, rom-com media, comedy media, film noir, self-deprecation memes, internet, internet drama (I want to add more interests but can’t think for something related to mind)

Mind is a hard one to really grab Interests for because it really is all about action. And usually facades, too. If she likes internet drama, she could probably even like like… internet trolling. Putting on a fake persona and stirring up shit on forums.

Title: Mage of Mind since she has mild sociopathic tendencies and also has to come to terms with her mind. (how can i portray her correctly lol)

I’ve said as much, but I really do agree with this. She understands Mind, Logic, Thought, and as a result she tries to passively push and form emotion to fit the mold of logic but it just doesn’t work. 

Land: (i havent thought of this one)

Land of Frost and Spines, maybe? Something chilly and spiky. 

Dream Planet: Prospit

Trivia: The songs that i’ve picked for her are also one of my favorite jams Bad Girls by Tennis, Sinful by Marina and Bad Reputation by Joan Jett. Also a lot of hedgehog jackshit because Hedgehog’s dilemma lol.   Honestly she kinda sounds like a Rage player writing this.

And oh I kind of projected on this character oof.

I like her a lot! And dw, I think she soudns more like a mind player than a rage. 

Design time!:

Sorry for the lack of transparent background once more. But here we go! 

Hair: I made her hair a liiiittle spikier just for the Hedgehog Theme. 

Face: Her eyes looked a little too familiar, so I change them up a bit to make her look slightly harsher. I also turned her lips blue just for some Variety. And I gave her a suspiciously heartshaped mole because... Marina Diamandis. 

Body in general: I just did some color and outline edits to make things visually read a lil better! 

Sign: I just made it smaller so it wouldn’t be hidden by the kerchief. 

-CD

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@wylmelvar

Alternia or Beforus or some type of AU:AU of Alternia where instead of HIC or Trizza rules, it’s ruled by a younger empress who runs it bad. Same problems applies.

Oo, did the new young empress manage to defeat HIC and take over? That could be Really fun, playing around with an inexperienced empress who’s just walking in her predecessor’s footsteps, clumsily. 

Name: Krasni Bonfac (Krasni is ’“red” in Russian and Bonfac came from Andres Bonifacio, a revolutionist in the Philippine Revolution. He leads a group called “the Katipunan” and their colors are red and white. She’s mostly based on revolutionists and rebel stuff.)

Oh you really anglicized красный for that name. When I looked up Krasni, I also found out it was the Slovenian word for Beautiful/Fine, and when used in some contexts it means First-Class People. I’ve also found some, uh… tenuous connections between the name Krasni and Serbian dictator supporters. So I don’t know if this is the beeest choice for a rebel character’s name. 

Maybe Luksem instead? As a reference to Rosa Luxemburg, a highly influential revolutionary socialist who was, on top of being imprisoned 3 times for revolutionary actions, executed for trying to start an uprising. 

Luksem Bonfac. 

Age: 7 sweeps

Strife Specibus: fistkind, bolokind

Like a bolo bat??! Just kidding, I’m guessing you mean a bolo knife, but you can just call it knifekind for that… Fistkind is fun, but being entirely unarmed is usually associated with void players, and I think a better option might be a Flagkind instead? A nice white and red flag that she whacks people with. So knifekind and flagkind! 

Fetch Modus: ????

Since she’s interested in history, maybe a history modus where she has to recite the origin of the item in order to obtain it?

Blood color:Teal

Symbol and meaning:Ligo, The Circumscribed (Prospit, Space)

I’d argue she’s Librist, but we’ll talk about that later. 

Trolltag:  (i need help with this one)

How about martialReformist? It’s a reference to the martial arts interest and her revolutionary nature, but is also a reference to the idea that she’s probably anti-war and also a prison reformist (or even abolitionist) because of her experiences. 

Quirk: Types in lowercase but capitalizes SOME WORDS for EMPHASIS. Starts sentences with (  ). Whisper/hides text with [(  )]. She sound like YELLING A LOT.

//Quirk has relation with sign since it means restricting something.

( it looks like THIS. IS THIS EVEN LEGIBLE? )

[( i hide text like this. )]

You don’t know how tempted I am here to actually suggest that she not use any capitals at all, because- because anti-capitalism do you like my joke— But no, capitalizing can be a really good way to emphasize things. 

Maybe she could organize sentences like pamphlets? 

Subheadings to her messages in caps, framed by |_’s, and caps for emphasis. 

Ex: |_EMPRESS CRUELTY_| news has broken of empress utilizing drones to RAZE coastal cities.

Special Abilities (if any): none, aside from enhanced strength after training a lot.

Lusus: a large monkey-eating eagle with 4 eyes and is lion-sized

It’s a WHAT…. I know now that that’s what Philippine Eagles are called but reading this ALARMED ME… Anyways that’s a good pick. 

Personality: Krasni is persuasive enough to let other trolls join her cause and can lead people well. She can be brutally honest that it makes her look tactless and can be aggressive and grumpy at times (unintended). She keeps up the facade that she’s strong but inside she’s a little broken after getting imprisoned. Can rebel in forms like clothing and even violent ones.

Rebellion Is Fun. Imprisonment is not… I think if you want to do this, you should definitely research into how imprisoned rebels experience their prison sentences and find some interviews about them talking about their lives afterwards! But I like her character a lot. Make sure to flesh out her exact goals- what Exactly is she rebelling against? What does she want to change? How does she get people to join her? 

Interests: revolutions, martial arts, history, persuasion, illegal works, law, the rebellions of the Sufferer and the Summoner, rebel stuff

What kind of rebel stuff? Is she interested in rebel warfare, or is she more politically inclined?

Title: (undecided since I didn’t intended to make most of my ocs play Sgrub but please do suggest)

Hmmm. You’ve definitely been inclined towards a space player here, but I think she might actually be a time player? Time players are the sort who are the strong rebels, the ones who are fighting against things. So it feels like that’d fit her better, too, especially if you want to keep her prospit.

She is ppprobably an Heir of Time? Passive inheritor, the changer, one with time. It helps her be a good leader/influencer. 

Land: Land of Barriers and Frogs

I have to steal her frog because I took away her space title, so she might instead be the Land of Barriers and Escape. Escape is a reference both to her prisony background And the escape wheel of a clock. Maybe her planet could be a big clockwork prison.

Dream Planet: Prospit

(o please do help since i made this on the spot except for some stuff)

Design:

There wasn’t much I wanted to edit about her character design, so I’ll try to be brief. There was some of that frustrating fuzziness going on, so I cleaned everything up. 

Horns/hair: I made the horns more symmetrical. I updated the hair and hair outlines to make things a bit more appealing. 

Face: I changed her eye shape just slightly and added heavier eye bags. I adjusted the scar color to be closer to what seems likely because of canon scar representations. I also added a bit of a tongue in her mouth, since it’s so wide open!

Skirt: Patterns aren’t common in troll clothing and it made her visually busy, so I traded it out for just a flat teal skirt. I also got rid of most of the rips for a similar reason. 

Legs/cuffs: I added a scar to her leg and adjusted the cuffs a little. I put some dings and scrapes on the cuffs so that they look worn, like they’ve been through trouble, or like she’s tried to break them off. 

Thank you for sharing!

-CD 

[wireskullarchived]

elder blake i still thank you for the art and manndroid au even tho i dont really show it

of course!! I cant wait to update it the next couple pages are going to be so GOOD

[tf2playernames]

i played with someone from a tf2 related discord named "less bean" who went medic and has a medi gun named "the power bottom"