#ly45p2

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ly45p2 notes from the editor + author commentary:

sometimes i want to save comments from edits because they're nice or cute or hit on a moment i was proud of or something, but going through comment history is a beast on google docs, and also like, there's usually a million "fix this, add some punctuation" comments. which like, is annoying to wade through if i just want to glance through the nice comments again?

so lowkey starting a semi-regular new thingswhere after i post a chapter, i'm sharing some of the nice comments my beta left + the text the comment was left on for posterity. it's gonna be really self-indulgent and may not be interesting to anyone but me, but that's okay 😂 what's life without being self indulgent sometimes🥰

caution: massive spoilers for ly45p2 below the cut

(was a big fan of the way this creative writing thing turned & felt very 🥰🥰🥰 at it hitting for my beta)

(loved writing this moment. they're always fun to write when they get to be silly and flirty and a lil bit kinky but mostly just having fun)

he really does 😂 he's trying so hard though!

(nothing hits quite like hearing i Nailed capturing an emotion)

getting wild this week and projecting on phil for a change

(fun fact: i literally wrote this last line and was like oh fuck that's a chapter end right there. and i was happy to stumble into that, because I hadn't been wild about the criss and the resolution all happenig in one chapter. some emotions demand to be sat with)

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(notes from the editor)

zero chance of a post tonight (exhausted, big days coming up), but does bode well for the tentative early next week timeline!

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how it started vs how it ended this morning… the repetition is too satisfying

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Hiii, how’s your day going? And how is the next chapter going? 👀 looking forward to it!!

hi! yesterday was one of those 12 hour, only sit down during work kind of days 😅 i'm moving house wicked soon which is beyond exciting but also life is a wee bit hectic rn lol

i knew the moving mess was coming this time and was able to plan ahead some when it came to writing. depending on my ability to finish the bits i need to finish and then find time for edits, we're probably looking at like a 6.5-7k 45p2 sometime next week and then and equal or longer part 3 in the next couple of weeks.