Hey! We’re a brand new Veronica Mars themed Town RP! Anyone can join, since there are no real ties to the show! Watched Veronica Mars or not, you’ll still be able to enjoy our plot and characters! That being said, we’d love a chance to get your opinion!
I just want to start this off with saying that I don’t really know anything about Veronica Mars so everything I learn about it will be from your page! Starting with your icon, I like that it’s nice and simple and your url is short and simple too while it also give a hint that this will be a Veronica Mars theme rp which is great! Moving on to your page, I like the theme that you’ve used and I think that the graphics look alright too, although the gifs in the camera are pretty grainy. On to your plot, I like that it’s nice and long and it is well written since I didn’t notice any errors as I read through it. I also like that you have a summary at the bottom and it sounds like an interesting rp. In your rules I think it doesn’t make sense where it says; “If you take two girls, your third character must be male. We aren’t incredibly strict on gender ratios or limiting characters” because I personally have always strongly disagreed with gender ratios since I don’t really think that it matters what gender is a character, and I don’t like that you’re going to make them take up a male character if they have two female characters, especially if you aren’t strict about gender ratios like you say. Other than that I really like all the rules that you’ve included and I think that they’re all well explained as well. I like that you have a lot of extra information on the navigation in regards to the town itself so that people can learn more about it. I like your application and it is easy to follow, I also like that you offer an original character option at the bottom for if they choose to create their own character. I think that your bios are very well written, although a little diversity would be better since from what I noticed most of them were white, so maybe just add a few more poc actors and if you need help with that feel free to come back and ask. All in all, it looks like you put a lot of effort into this rp and I wish you the best of luck with it!
