Demo Update 7
Total Length: 92.5k words
Average Playthrough Length: 22k words
Requested Feedback:
Please let me know of any typos/grammatical/coding issues as always! Also, if you’re not getting dialogue choices specific to you choices in Chapter 2 with Rosy and in the texts, please screenshot and send to me. There’s a lot of times where the same thing is done in different ways depending on your past actions, but it’s too many different branches to test by hand.
Also let me know if any actions repeat (like if Gray gives you a crockpot twice), if people’s commentary doesn’t reflect your stats. Feel free to suggest any choices you wish had been present but weren’t. Grayson’s segment in particular was rewritten tonight, so there are likely issues that I missed.
And Lev is an entirely new addition as of a few hours ago because I need him for something in future chapters. So his dialogues may not be the most polished--I plan on going back and fluffing them up a bit. (Essentially, making it funnier from its current rough version.)
Descriptions of the Skydeck and Ledge (UCRT headquarters) are placeholders until I actually make time to visit in person.
A lot of backstory being hashed over in the first part of Chapter 3, but I promise the slow buildup will be worth it :) Other than that, I’d suggest being nice to Lev. You never know when you might need a character witness.
