Script change- Jacques and Marvin. (Also i love how you included Jacques backstory in the Schneep Prompt! Keep up the awesome work my dude!)
I’m reading script change as re-writing an alternate scenario for an altercation -- if that’s not what you intended I’d be happy to write something else!
Original prompt: Marvin tries to strangle Jacques in anger
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Jacques had managed to take him once before, but Marvin wasn’t going to let that happen again. He was in Jacques’ apartment, and had been there for who knows how long -- and he was fed up with how this painter was treating him and his friends.
Marvin had had enough.
When Jacques next came through the doorway to the bedroom he was in, Marvin was ready, throwing a blast of green magic in Jacques’ direction. It was powerful enough to send the painter crashing through the doorway and landing painfully on the ground, curling up in a ball and shielding himself.
“You’re awake?” Jacques asked, voice almost a squeak. “How? I made sure-”
“I’m not your fucking puppet!” Marvin snarled, advancing toward Jacques. “You’re under my command now.” He thought about lunging toward the painter, picturing himself strangling the man to death, but Marvin refrained. He had a better idea anyway.
Holding out his hand, he whispered a few short words, sending a gentle light heading for Jacques. The painter was captured immediately, eyes glowing a bright green as the spell entranced him, rendering him helpless.
“Now,” Marvin said, crouching down so he was eye level. “You are going to listen to me, Jacques Septique, and you are going to obey every last command I give you. Do you understand?”
“.....oui,” Jacques whispered, eyes widening.
“Good. You are mine now,” Marvin said. There was the tiniest purple glow flaring up in his eyes as he gave the hypnotized painter a toothy grin. “We’re going to have fun.”














