May 25
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oh. hello. because it's you, in the second chapter of triptych after shepard's near meltdown, i had three different versions drafted as to how that scene ended. in the first version, they went up to shepard's cabin and he slept on her couch, but they'd already gone up to her cabin a few other times. in the second, he took her to the battery, and in the third and final, he asks if she wants to spar to burn off some energy. some of the lines remained or got repurposed elsewhere though!
in the first:
in the second:
in the final:
