writing this chapter is fun because it’s like I’ve been writing it for so long now that it all feels like dogshit.
And while part of it is “you’ve edited it to death” another part is I HAVENT FINISHED IT.
it’s frustrating because Ray does so little in it (save the first half where he flips out on Juni—also notably the better half) it just feels like I should be able to summarize this in two or three paragraphs—but so much is happening ✨around✨ him. And now I’m sitting here like. Was it worth it lol. Should I just scrap it. He’s not doing anything anyway.
BUT IVE WORKED SO HARD ON IT.
Also, I might just take concepts from this section and use them in other scenes.
Or maybe I’ll write what I originally imagined and submit it to the beta of like what do you think babe.
No, I’m gonna make my life more complicated. I’ll write two versions of this chapter. One where Ray and Juni escape w/o Cherine interference and one (current) where Cherine comes to do a friendly little visit. And see which one is stronger.
Actually, third option. I write a third version of the chapter and it’s from someone else’s perspective that notably isn’t Ray’s. BECAUSE AGAIN. MY GUY. YOU ARE DOING NOTHING.
