#nanm

[mandoinevarro]

If chapter 5 is no happy ending or no apologies I will literally manifest a chapter six

(I don’t think you’re that cruel though)

Oh babe you don’t know me

[mandoinevarro]

exCUSE ME what do you MEAN only one chapter left of RMRB like WHAT

you heard me

[mandoinevarro]

hi ZOOMED over here from reading the latest chapter of rule maker rule breaker because i am just in AWE the whiplash of emotions the phenomenal characterization the incredible writing a true masterpiece thank you

Let me ZOOM over here and say that I appreciate your message so so so much!! I was cold and grumpy but this warmed my heart thank you, anon!!!! 🥺🥺🥺

[mandoinevarro]

So at first my thirsty ass was reading for the smut but now I Am Fully Invested, I am buying your stocks, see, see the charts. The way you write the characters is so natural and ahhhh just perfect wtf, this is exactly how Din would talk and exactly how I’d imagine his thoughts in character!!! Chefs kiss baby, CHEFS KISS!!! And you’re doing the smutty lords work, that fight scene broke my heart but all I could think about was the make-up sex 🥲

I’m not sure what’s happening in this ask and idk what stocks you’re talking about or if I’m missing something but THANK YOUUU!!! I’m so happy this is how you imagine din and, again, sorry about the angst sjdhsjsk

Edit: ohhhh invested...

[mandoinevarro]

The meme of that girl smirking with a burning house behind her = you rejoicing in all our screams and cries after Rule Breaker ;___;

lmfaoo nooooo, anon

...okay yea a little bit but if it makes you feel any better this was me after I finished writing the chapter

[mandoinevarro]

I am suing after that ending!!!! You write soooo good I can SEE everything happening in my mind. How dare you hurt me this way :( I will send you my therapy bill

my attorney has advised me not to answer this. I will see you in court tho, I’m not paying those bills

[mandoinevarro]

almost got too overwhelmed about the ending to give any feedback but it’s too good so here we go. THE CONTRAST BETWEEN THEIR THOUGHTS I was not ready for a din pov to hear all the doubts he has about himself that hUrt and then the way you kept transitioning from his thoughts to the dialogue: the “better off— tucked away” fucking KILLED. everything flows so naturally every piece just falls into place. And just the way you’ve written Nevarro from it’s rep to it’s landscape to it’s buildings and their inhabitants. The whole theme of it is so raw and gives so much fuel to the story. catch me trying to fix the ending in my head so I can sleep tn. I’m angry but I know you’re gonna fix it but I’m angry ALSO JUST ONE CHAPTER LEFT??? I should’ve seen this coming I know. Still I’m gonna miss it when it’s gone.

me after i read this:

This is such a wonderful, amazing, showstopping comment thank you SO MUCH for taking the time to tell me what you liked about the chapter 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 you literally don’t know how much this means to me thank you thank you!!!! I’m so happy you liked it in spite of... everything lol

i love you happy 2021 I hope you find money on the street today

[mandoinevarro]

ok yes im back now that i have metabolized the pain of that last update and let me just say like fantastic din characterization, amazing reader characterization, and incredibly loving relationship dynamic aside— your prose is SO GOOD. like there have been so many points while reading rule maker that I just paused to be like ‘wow. wow this is SUCH good writing.” like u are genuinely so impressive and cram so much amazing description into perfectly balanced pacing. u have my whole heart & respect

Baby thank you SO SO MUCH FOR TELLING ME THIS!!! you have a special place in my heart, anon. I love that you’re enjoying characterization and prose, because it means all those 2 am writing seshs crouched over my computer looking like coraline’s dad paid off! I love you have a gr8 day 🥺🥺