hello! i hope u don't take this the wrong way bc i rly enjoyed ur series! what i rly found unique and drew me into next time was that it was one of the first fics ive ever read where osamu was the twin who was kinda bad(?) at relationships. often, atsumu is written to be this fuckboy asshole (which he isnt) and osamu is written as an angel coming to rescue y/n from the blond devil. given that they feature heavily in each other's stories, i rly liked ur unique take on the dynamic 💕
+ a follow up to my prev ask: NO shade on any writers who write atsumu like that! its just that your fic (apart from being very beautifully written- i found myself being very easily able to feel whatever the main character was feeling) is a very refreshing read and i look forward to whatever you have in store for us
+ OMG a very final and embarrassing follow up to the prev 2 asks: thank u so much for portraying osamu as a realistic character. he isn't the 'good twin' just like tsumu isn't the 'bad one'. i think ur series is very much an exercise in perfect characterisation of osamu (being that he is just as flawed as his twins, albeit in diff ways). much love
this is super refreshing what!!!! (i did not take it the wrong way do not fret)
that’s really interesting to hear because like ... idk like relationships in general are just work imo. not everything’s gonna be smooth sailing, whether you’re good at them or bad at them. like obviously some people are better at relationships than others, but it’s still work at the end of the day. and not everyone’s gonna be perfect, there are going to be road bumps along the way, so that was really what i was trying to capture with that one. i haven’t gotten the chance to do much reading lately (booo) so this is really interesting to hear
i’m very glad to hear that it was easy to see where mc was coming from! like she’s annoying too tbh, and very clearly she’s not great at relationships either. idk, everything isn’t gonna be perfect. there are things i would change about her, but i guess yeah the point was to express that relationships are work. of course, it got a little Dramatic and Unreasonable at times ... also smth i would change ... but i am a slore for some good theatrics anyways :3
PLEASE THE LAST LINE WHAT ..... THAT’S A REALLY BIG COMPLIMENT LIKE IDK i’m still struggling with characterizations across the board i think. i haven’t watched the series in a while (been a few months tbh) and i used to do these little exercises to get a better hold of hq characters, but it’s been a while since i’ve done those too, so i feel like really out of touch idk. so this was really really nice to hear. i think something that weighs heavily on his character is quite literally only knowing conflict related to his brother. and obviously something like that is not gonna translate very well to a significant other. idk. many thoughts, but really really thankful to have someone think i did well in that arena!
i hope you’re keeping well and having a great day or night! thank u so much for ur kind words ):
