Wednesday Lecture
Shared my first paragraph of my synopsis and i need to show more of the actual story and what happens in it and a hint of the characters arc, including the homeless man, what's there purpose and what do they do etc...
a more solid way to show Remi’s arrogance/ungrateful nature: a customer tips her and she is ungrateful with the amount given etc. show her character as dislikeable so that there is more to improve on at the end, showing more of a character Arc.
tips:
Let them play out scenes
Tell more about the characters, if the homeless man is mysterious then tie the character into a story in a mysterious way, for example: could he be her father? or was he once a customer who helped her in some way resulting in the life she currently has and seeing how she is ungrateful he wants to change that?
Tie the homeless man into the story more
genres: redemption and maturity works but need to elaborate on Remi’s character, showing her maturing, or redeeming herself in some way. (in a more elaborate way)
