May we have an opinion, please? Thank you in advance for your time!
You may, yes.
Firstly, your icon and url don’t tell me much. I get a story vibe from it, but that’s all really.. I kinda like it, until I come onto your page and get a better idea of what it is about. Your icon and url give me quite a different vibe, although I get the connection.As for your aesthetics, it doesn’t match! The colour scheme matches your background, but they don’t match your graphics. At all! The colour scheme and background have a green element that is completely missing in your graphics! Your graphics are very white, which does return, and redish. Maybe some light blue. But no green whatsoever. I do like the graphics, however, so if I have to suggest anything it is redo your background and colour scheme so it fits your graphics. Damn, I like your plot. It has both a OUAT and a Gossip Girl vibe, and it works surprisingly good. I know you state it wasn’t based of the series, so I tried to pay attention to the difference, and although they are small - aside from the Storyteller - , they are definitely there. The plot is well writen, and even though it is long, it reads through quickly and easily. I love the part about the residents where you describe them, but don’t say their names, because they are so familiar and that makes me happy in some way. Don’t ask me why. Moving on, the bios are great. I haven’t really read many, but they are good. I like the format. Idk there isn’t much to add. By the way, I like how you also tagged them by story! Quickly some other things, Your rules are clear. Although I mostly see them fully written, stating them like this is fine. You don’t really need more and it’s complete like this. Also, I like the app. It’s simple, and it’s a full one. I would’ve added a part about how they are portraying their character, but that’s just me. If it works, it works.
NOTE: I like that you have extra pages, as I always like seeing, but some of them are confusing to me. For example the ‘read this’ page. I don’t get what I’m supposed to get out of that except inside info about characters, which is strange since you have bios and you are supposed to be able to find such info there! Also I don’t understand the Storyteller page. You already introduced her in the plot..
Overall, this is a lovely rp. The page is a little off in aesthetics, but that isn’t the most important part aout a rp. It’s a great plot, great characters and I believe this has potential. So, I wish you best of luck and for any of my classic-loving, bio rp’ers, I REC this!
