I feel a sense of partial success in that my intentions for this shot I think are clear to the viewer. There is partial ambiguity in the ‘hedging my bets’ aspect with the framing, to be sure, as I quickly tried to decide which bird should get full attention. In retrospect, it seems clear that the flying bird was the more dynamic choice and the framing ought to reflect that. The attempt to include the second bird for contrast was ambitious, but folly.
















