Can we get some Director’s Commentary on Ivory Tower tho
Oh! My random-ass GohanxDende story on Ao3 from a few years ago??? Oh sure!!!
So, the story itself began as a draft as I was hammering out the finer details of Dende as he (and his motives) appear in Heavy/The Red Boy and before I knew it the whole thing had just spun off into its own thing since I knew I wasn’t exactly going to get in deep with any kind of shown romantic relationship between the two of them in that story (by design. Unless I’m writing a specific ship for a specific niche I don’t like to mix my “blatant ship fic” with my “big scale action-adventure-drama fic”, if that makes sense. I don’t know; I guess I just have levels of indulgences when it comes to fanfiction because I generally only write it when I have an axe to grind.) There was enough content there that I figured I ought to post it and see what happened.
Um, I remember I had planned out “and they will be teaching Piccolo how to read!!” as a scene and a gag (because it’s among my favorite fanon Piccolo cliches), as well as the idea that “ha ha they’ll probably do that Cliche Nerd Thing where they get a little too close while studying because it’s just a thing that screams “Son Gohan” in glittering all caps”. That was pretty much it. The rest of it kind of organically happened??? I’m not happy with all of it in retrospect but I’m glad I wrote it if only because Gohan/Dende deserves the world and I can say I contributed.
My favorite chapter to write was definitely the one where Gohan takes Dende to a family dinner. As much as I like Gohan and Dende, I was so, SO happy to for once write a “domestic” Goku (as much as one can domesticate Goku) in a low-stakes setting as he is in the manga. Which is to say, “I love writing Goku (and Chi Chi, but hers is different) with a dialect.” I know some reviewers were upset about that because some claimed it made them sound stupid and others claimed it made their lines harder to read, but honestly? The inclusion made just as many reviewers (and me) very happy, so it was all a mixed bag. In general, people’s reactions to my work between Ao3 and ff.net are like night and day, so I’m used to mixed feedback, but this is one of the rare instances where the split of opinion happened pretty much entirely amongst the Ao3 crowd and not at all in the ff.net audience. At least, most people on ff.net did not say anything about it.
Thanks for the question!! Hopefully that was enlightening!












